|Reviews for Silly Girl|
| alice'hatter3 chapter 5 . 4/17/2011
this is so fun to read, when i first read the authors note i thought u said 'i murdered mally on accident!' XD
| alicehatter3 chapter 4 . 4/17/2011
| alice'hatter3 chapter 3 . 4/17/2011
- 3 love it! so sweet at the end of the chapter
| alice'hatter3 chapter 2 . 4/17/2011
.awesome. i can go on forever! hatter and alice FOREVER!
| alice'hatter3 chapter 1 . 4/17/2011
wow, my jaw is on the floor! LOVE IT! [not that im cruel, its just the creativity u have] btw i have an account and when i log on u will know its me cuz i comment on every chapter all the time.
| kat chapter 7 . 3/23/2011
i dont know how long ago this was written but i still feel the need to say keep it up that last chapter was... well incredible. keep going and i hope things settle down for you, or have already
p.s sorry about the spelling i dont usually leave comments for that reason
| Nonimouse chapter 7 . 10/12/2010
Oh wow poor Tweedle. That is seriously sick and twisted. This is turning into a horror story of grand proportions. I vote that at the end of this story Alice somehow gets to go back in time and fix everything so that none of this ever happens. Poor Tweedle!
| Nonimouse chapter 6 . 10/12/2010
Only just started reading this story. It's really unique, not read any other story where the Red Queen turns 'nice.'
...but I have to say this chapter confused me a lot. Last chapter they were in the Outlands and then suddenly Alice is reunited with Mally and Thackery and in a rebel camp. *blinks* Kinda came out of nowhere for me... and also in this chapter Tarrant has his hat back for some unexplained reason. Remember he lost it during the chase in a previous chapter.
Dosn't matter though, I'm still loving this story and really looking forward to more. :)
| Bloody-Asphode11 chapter 7 . 8/28/2010
"..." okay i believe my previous hope is going to be answered soon
MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA BEWARE BLACK WITCH MIRANA
THE MAD HATTER COMES OUT TO PLAY
AND PAYBACK'S A BITCH
| Bloody-Asphode11 chapter 2 . 8/28/2010
I agree with that last part
I didn't like him seeing all timid and subdued
Madness no mater what cause is the essence of chaos, nothing can limit it, or stop it
The Mad Hatter is its symbol, he is quite frankly a source of it NEVER DISRESPECT
The Queens Should fear him more then Alice, THE MAD HATTER IS INSANITY MADE SOLID
so what do you think is going to happen when you freaking pissed him off?
I really hope as i read on that that the Mad Hatter lives up to his name
| katzsoa chapter 7 . 8/15/2010
Holy crud! Poor Tweedles! This was just as good, albeit short. But, sometimes short is okay! Just like this review, haha.
| Niphuria chapter 7 . 8/15/2010
No, no, no! You're doing fine! Keep writing! And I like this chapter. It was very creepy and disturbing the way poor Tweedle-Dee is now, and really underlines how serious the problem is. Even Alice now realizes just how bad things are.
Don't be so hard on yourself. Try to relax a little if you can. This is good! :)
I'm glad to have even got the three page "rabble!"
| Ngoc Chau chapter 7 . 8/15/2010
What happened to the Tweedles?
Were they torn apart and they were only able to save one of them by salvaging the other's parts to repair the other? Is that what happened?
And explain to me please!
| Jeni27 chapter 7 . 8/15/2010
It really wasn't as bad as you make it out to be. It was atually quite excellent. A bit sad and somewhat gory, ok, really sad. I an't believe you killed off one of the Tweedles and mangled the other. I understand it was a necessary evil for the story but it's just sad. :(
I hope you don't give up on this story. You write it well, and even if you have to take a break from it because life is sucking, I will still wait for your updates, this story is too freaking AWESOME to not read. (Even if I do suck at giving reviews) Besides, if you give the story to someone else, it may not go in the direction you wanted it too. *grin*
I hope life gets better for you. Just remember, when you hit the bottom, there's no way to go but up.
| Kirby77DP77 chapter 7 . 8/14/2010
Relax, the chapter was very well done. Don't stress. :)
I hope you get your poor shed back on the ground, and kick those people's butts for doing something so terrible to you. ;)