|Reviews for The Cockroach|
| Mage of Hope chapter 1 . 4/19/2012
So funny! Thanks for making this fic!
| KeRose chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
Funny fic about Naoto (my fave character). Even more funnier is that I am reading your story and the ad banner on the top is for "Front Sight: Firearms Training Institute" (This is not a namedrop) Seems like ffnet has some sort of conspiracy with the ads, hmm?
As was said by previous review, the characters were very much IC, and Naoto thinking that she could shoot and insect, expecially after being a bit unnerved is, oddly, in-character as well as funny.
Best line is the ending line.
| S. Chensu and Luff chapter 1 . 8/30/2010
Haha, well you have to admit cockroaches are a little bit grim. Good little fic :)
| AkinoChiba chapter 1 . 8/6/2010
The incident was never spoken of again.
XD XD XD
This was really funny XD Everyone acted so in character too.
It whould have been perfect if it was longer, But I'm not complaining :D
Thank you for the funny P4 short.
| SecondAsian chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
This was a nice little oneshot, and I liked how naturally you made Naoto's thinking. It could've been a bit longer, but still, very nice. (; Please make more!
| ginryuumaru chapter 1 . 7/26/2010
Naoto shoot that insect? Hahaha!