|Reviews for Naruto the Black Blade|
| wolfbane chapter 14 . 7/9
this overall is a good story. so can you reboot it or something because this story is quality and you have followed a, what i find to be, a shameful habit of just abandoning a good story and not even a curtisy chapter saying your abandoning it that i have seen on this site. all that said i will still ask (sorry for the crude way i will ask it. it is shaped from my very low opinion of jariya's person) . what is up with making your fox boss a diseased slut?
| Ryuu842 chapter 4 . 6/18
It's not the collarbone. It's the calbatory artery.
| Guest chapter 3 . 5/20
| conan.lagace chapter 14 . 5/20
Great story... I hope you update sometime soon, almost three years is quite a while.
| AnonBryd chapter 8 . 5/16
I just want to say that Neji should not have been able to defeat Yoroi, and that Yoroi was actually the worst enemy for someone like Neji (a Hyuuga) to face, because his entire style revolves around using chakra to damage the opponent's insides, whereas Yoroi's entire style revolves around absorbing chakra on contact, not just with his hands but his entire body, which would nullify any attack Neji threw at him.
| Dadlop3 chapter 14 . 5/15
Omg update this. This ks like the best plot twist I've ever read.
| Lerris chapter 13 . 3/23
Still no update. Ah well..
| Lerris chapter 4 . 3/22
It seems I read this in 2012 and I guess it hasn't been updated since. Ah well, just once, it would be nice to get to a wave arc where Kakashi takes the team back and gets the Third to send a properly ranked team. Team 7 could then go on an original messed up mission. Overall though the basic idea of this story is more original than most.
| Astroman1000 chapter 14 . 1/24
Bro this story is amazing but it's been YEARS since the last update you probably don't even visit this site anymore but I know that om and a whole bunch of other readers would very much appreciate an update the story is amazing and despite it not being done I'm happy to have found it thank you
| DarkFox17 chapter 14 . 1/20
Good story hope that it continues in the future.
That sentence 'Fuck you Jiraiya, if she ends up turning my skin into a coat, I'm totally blaming you.'
Nearly lost my shit laughing so hard.
| Trey of the rebellion chapter 14 . 1/19
AHHHHH Y U NO UPDATE!###!#
| Mega Latios 1988 chapter 14 . 1/2
I find Tsunade's change in character quite funny. Also this story is going really well. I hope you update
| Mega Latios 1988 chapter 6 . 1/1
With the way Naruto is going now I wonder if the blond will be able to make fox fire clones at some point. I wonder when Haku will wake up. Also I can see that it was indeed needed for Naruto to avoid the 5 element seal. Once again nice chapter and keep up the good work
| Mega Latios 1988 chapter 3 . 1/1
Just a thought but I was wondering if you were going to give Black Mirage the ability to eat chakra like Kisame's Samaheda. Once again nice touch with the tourney between the graduates. Normally in fics like these Naruto lets his skills show during the Chunin Exams. So kudos to you for doing something different yet again
| Mega Latios 1988 chapter 2 . 1/1
I actually like the way you changed the scenes. It makes it more enjoyable for readers who are of a more mature age. You can still add in jokes in the midst of it. A few laughs here and there with the scene changes will increase the quality of the story further. Anyway keep up the good work.