Reviews for Abnormally Average
timeroulettego chapter 9 . 2/3/2013
Great story, always really good to see a story that fits the show and keeps everyone in-character, and you've done both brilliantly. I especially liked chapter 6, it was great how Kyle and Cartman were both 'right' on Stan's personality, I'm kinda building on the Stan & Cartman friendship thing in one of my stories right now.

One question though - is it finished? I might be missing something obvious but this chapter is written with a really good ambiguous ending - you could end it now and no-one would be the wiser ;), hopefuly its not though.
doingyourmom chapter 9 . 11/11/2012
It is great to see stan be back to normal. I would love to see randy back in his man vs. wild stage in the real show that sound like something he would do. You know as tired as I am of Stendy, really him and Wendy could make really good freinds, I know guys being just freinds with girls seems impossible to some, but it can work. If Wendy and Stan were just good freinds(not as good as kyle but better than cartman), really their realtionship could work out better and they woud not have to play off of each other. I really feel bad for Kenny, he has not best freind at all, or any girlfreind. I would suggest maybe Him and Wendy as freinds, but ever since that butters and kenny hawiaii epsiode I really have been wondering are you going to add that to this story. I understan if you do not there is a lot going on. Great chapter and you get more into the charcters and the retlionships. I really do feel bad for Kenny, but he is a good guy.
doingyourmom chapter 8 . 11/11/2012
I like this chapter and Wendy trying to decide what to do with Stan and their realtionship. As much as I am tired of Stendy it is hard to let go of it, but really it has been done over and over again, but it when I wrote stan vs. craig it was hard to let go for some reason even though I was tired of it . However Wendy is a great character, I love this chapter, she is proably my fav right behind Cartman and butters and is great by her self. Wendy loves Stan, but if she dumps him storyline wise I cannot blame her, I mean she has every right to really, even though I like Stan. Wendy is a great character that really helps enhance a lot of storylines, so I cannot blame you for writing her. The scene where kenny comes in is funny as hell. I do metion I have a foot fetish, though not a severe one. Wendy being barefoot doing her toes is great because her being barefoot is rare, and it should be that way where you see their toes in south park usally they do not show toes in south park that as a guy with a foot fetish I applaud you for that, sorry I cannot help it. When she was barefoot was she in her regular gear when she was doing her toes that would look weird. It was funny when kenny caused her to get nail polish all over he bare foot was funny. However it was hearbreaking to see the reaction at the end. Great chapter and the ending was great as well, really shows how good and how much better this story gets the next one is slow but it is still good. Next chapter review.
doingyourmom chapter 7 . 11/10/2012
I love kenny and how he treis to protect Karen from hearing his parents. Kenny is a good person no matter what anyone says about him in the fandom. Kenny really has to deal with a lot of messed up crap in his life. Kenny does the right thing all all the time, he helps karen out a lot. Kenny at this point really does not know what happend to Stan and Kyle. Great chapter you really descirbed Kenny well and how he struggles every day to help his family out and himself out. Awsome chapter, not really any devolpement but good to get to the next chapter.
doingyourmom chapter 6 . 11/10/2012
I love this chapter. When kyle called Sharon I really felt bad for her. I do not blame him for hanging up, he did not want to worry her. I feel horrible for Kyle, Kyle goes through so much in this fic, has to deal with my faviorte character in cartman and the possible death of Stan. Really I know this is a stan fic, but really the star of this is kyle even though it is about Stan to me Kyle and Cartman are the stars mainly because Stan has been down for some time. However I expect that to change chapter 10 if you do write it. Great chapter. Menphisto getting arrested is very dramtatic I hope he gets broken out of jail for saving Stan's life. Great chapter, awsome first 9 chapters I read the 9th one, I review the others in a minute.
doingyourmom chapter 5 . 11/10/2012
There being framed for buring glimmer corp. Cartman is an asshole, doing that to poor kyle, I swear kyle was going to have a breakdown. You may have not killed Stan but he is in bad shape. This is a real dramatic, though it is humor with Cartman iis good. Kyle really does care about Stan. You have cartmans charcter spot on, he is uncaring and even considerd killing his freinds for help in the last chapter. This was an awsome dramtic chapter it is truley an awsome chapter, I hope that you finsish this one day.
doingyourmom chapter 4 . 11/10/2012
When I first read this I was scared for Stan. I knew stan would be okay but dang this was scary when first I read it. Of course cartman is the whole reason why this happend if he had not been such an ass. Cartman hitting kyle in the head is just brutal. They are little kids yet they are driving. I thought you were going to kill stan and bring him back to life or somthng like that. Great chapter, a sick chapter and kenny's death is awsome. The car crash really sets up the rest of this story.
doingyourmom chapter 3 . 11/10/2012
I love the fact jimbo went up to the treehouse and kept stans secret. Stan may not be a pussy but he loves the animals, I am glad this is included. Cartman only seems to be a real ass to stan when it is about Wendy, I guess that is the one way that Stendy can still be intersting it seems is stan defeding wendy from cartman unless they have sex and they are to young. Stan trying to get into gillmer corp is not a good idea and will probably hurt him. (I am reveiwing in a way without giving spoliers) Good chapter, I will be reviewing the next one, btw I noticed chapter 9, I read 8 last, so that chapter will be new to me.
doingyourmom chapter 2 . 11/10/2012
I love how shelly just slapped stan, stan is right he is the only one in the family who is normal. I kinda like how they are overaracting to Stan throwing up. It is funny that you metion randy's bad cooking and him being out of a job. Stan's family is kinda of a disfuctional family and that is the way it should be. Stan just does not want to be around his parents. Very nice chapter.
doingyourmom chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
I love this chapter like I did the first time. Stan throwing up on Wendy again is awsome. It is funny that Wendy left the girls council that is way Wendy should be written is a inpendent woman on her own without anyone telling her what to do. She does not follow trends like most people do. Stan usally gets worried over nothing but that is what is good about stan. Great chapter going also the test for Wendy seeing if she is still attracted to stan is good to.
YeMerryHippogriffs chapter 9 . 9/14/2012
Great look into Stan's role in the show. It's hard to describe Stan's character since he's usually the straight man and since the show's continuity is all over the place. This fic does a great job of deconstructing that. Also, yay Kenny for being awesome.
Wensleydale Cheddar chapter 9 . 8/15/2012
So Mephesto is now in prison... I wonder what Kyle will do to save him, now that Stan's alright. Exactly, Stan's alright. I was expecting the operation to go wrong somehow... And yet he behaves like always. Anyway, clever way of explaining why Stan doesn't vomit anymore... if the story is set after "The List". Also the personality operation explains why Stan has started to take a level in jerkass after season 15. It was probably one of Cartman's comments which altered his personality.

Speaking of Cartman, I hope that he's hatching some ingenious plan using Stan's (yet hidden) personality change or Mephesto's imprisonment for his own benefit. The group has lost most of its dynamic due to Eric's absence... That's probably the reason why everyone's following Stan around. And Kenny becomes the chew toy of the group, as always.

I was happy to see yet another stupid plan of Randy's. Man and Stan vs. Wild... I can imagine that... Sharon's unusually passive about his antics this time. And of course Kenny and Bebe are still admiring her good figure, etc. It's strange that Randy refused Gerald's offer to warm his body in "Two days before the day after tomorrow" and yet uses a homosexual dog to do the same.

Looking forward to the next chapter, hopefully with Cartman in it.
Marcus Absent chapter 9 . 8/6/2012
Good chapter, and excellent use of the characters.

The only complaint I have would have to be that, having the whole "new Stan" hook hanging over me since Chapter 6 and thinking it was about to hit, it looks like I have to wait ANOTHER chapter for something to happen (at least, I assume there hasn't been a big change in his personality. Some hostility towards Kenny, perhaps? Maybe I'm just not as tuned-in to Stan).

But that's just me being impatient, I suppose. Even if it wasn't what I was expecting, it was still a very enjoyable read. Especially the part about Kenny bringing porn to the hospital. Oh, Kenny...
brittishlikepip chapter 9 . 8/4/2012
NOOOOOO! I just realised: you haven't updated yet! Poor Kenny! And Kyle, and Stan! And Mephesto especially xP
JVM-SP150 chapter 9 . 8/3/2012
Great chapter, especially the second half. Stan really built the suspense up, and you managed to hint towards things without making it too obvious. We get a lot of little moments from everyone, even Sharon and Randy, and you know I love when the ensemble shines. Yay Sparky exists. And you finally got to use the whole Randy vs. Wild thing xD

In fact, the only person I can think who felt missing at all (besides Cartman since I'm pretty sure you're going somewhere with that) is Shelly.

Also, it's 'Wrath of Khan' not 'Wrath of Kahn'. Almost forgot.
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