Reviews for Darkness
wendy1969 chapter 3 . 8/15/2010
I aint tryin to offend you ... But what was all this? I dont know if she is vamped out and with the cullens or what. Is she alone? Why is Jasper ignoring her now. Help me understand. PLEASE.
NC-MjR-FanForLife chapter 3 . 8/5/2010
WOW! OMG!
asche chapter 3 . 8/3/2010
i love it! you write beautifully, thank you for the jpov. loved it...ops i said it twice but yeah it was awesome!
0Skye0 chapter 2 . 8/3/2010
Ooooooh! What does he mean he can't let her go? I'm just guessing but is it time for some magical vampire venom? Alice was acting like a bit of a bitch in that chappie. I mean who says "no jasper. You love me. Not her" although these r your characters! Update! HW XXXXXXX
theArtsy1 chapter 2 . 8/2/2010
OH NO! this is good, please continue!
Seddielovergrl chapter 2 . 8/2/2010
This was really deep- amazing!
MustLoveDrReid chapter 2 . 8/2/2010
OMG! Wow, that was amazing! Plz write more! Make him save her
Jasper'sdarksoul chapter 2 . 8/2/2010
i can't wiat to read more.. of course if u wil be writing more! anyway plz write more and update soon:)
edwardlover13 chapter 2 . 8/2/2010
WOW! i loved it...plz plz wright more, have him save her PLEASE!
0Skye0 chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
This story was really great! Are you planning on keeping it a one shot? cuz really I think this story deserves a whole story or at least another chapter in JPOV cuz I want to know wat he feels! thanks HW xxxx
nia-ox chapter 1 . 7/31/2010
Very well written and a great concept, kind of wish it were longer!
asche chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
i would like to know jaspers pov on this, you should continue it.
edwardlover13 chapter 1 . 7/26/2010
u shuld really continue this story...i almost started crying. it wuld make such a GREAT story...plz plz continue
NC-MjR-FanForLife chapter 1 . 7/26/2010
Wow, i almost started to cry at the end of that! holy crap that is so sad! i wonder what would have happened if her hand didnt slip.
NC-MjR-FanForLife chapter 1 . 7/26/2010
Wow, i almost started to cry at the end of that! holy crap that is so sad! i wonder what would have happened if her hand didnt slip.
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