|Reviews for Revelations|
| Underclass Kid chapter 32 . 2/6
Hey, I just want you to know that I am very glad I fou d this fic. I always like unusual fic, like this one. Many typos, that's rather annoying but I can tolerate that, your good story made up for those typos. It's a fine fic. Thanks for writing it.
If you want to respond, underclass kid is my real account, I'm just too lazy to log in.
| Guest chapter 32 . 7/19/2014
I don't know if you're even going to read this, but I just had to write this out. Your story was amazing. The way everything was written, the way everything was wove together...just wonderful...reading this was better than reading any best-selling novel out there...just wow...
| Guest chapter 5 . 5/14/2014
A lot of typos... Almost in every paragraph, I do hope this gets better. I am here because of the author Toryisconfuseddotcom, she said that this was an amazing story. I hope this is true, or that you get a beta because it is quote irksome reading typo after typo.
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/13/2013
Your good your really good
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/13/2013
Freaking cool...awesome intro
| Kernigh chapter 32 . 10/9/2013
Vampires in Middle-earth? Limyaael already parodied the idea in chapter 22 of _The Game of the Gods_. It seemed to be an awful idea. So _Revelations_ by Aralinn is better than I expected. It takes much work to insert vampires into the legendarium. Aralinn creates an origin for the vampires that ties in with _The Silmarillion_ and explains how vampires hid from other races. The vampires have many superpowers, and Túrante in chapter 3 has 'light energy' powers on top of her vampire powers; but they are not too powerful. The story balances good vampires against evil vampires, and Túrante does not instantly win every battle. It is fun in chapter 10 when Túrante demolishes a random group of orcs (with a bit of help from Éomer and Gandalf), but many moments are more dangerous.
Two aspects are difficult to believe. In chapter 11, Túrante uses her fangs to remove the venom from the wound in Aragorn. Now, I assume that the venom already spread through Aragorn's body. So, Túrante must fail unless she takes all the blood (and Aragorn dies), or she filters the venom from all the blood (like in dialysis). However, I am active at TV Tropes, and found the trope page for Suck Out The Blood. It explains that in fiction, the poison often stays near the wound. That is weird.
The second aspect is that Angband still exists, and has a convenient secret tunnel. I think that Angband became completely destroyed during the War of Wrath back in _The Silmarillion_, but its destruction is not too important to the legendarium, so I might pretend that it never happened. Yet, I must doubt that Morgoth would ever allow anyone to tunnel out of the dungeon. After that, Eglanon has thousands of years to find the tunnel entrance. The plot requires Angband and the tunnel, so there is no possible fix here.
I guessed that Edlyn and Kieon would appear later in the story, but they did not. In chapter 6, Túrante declared, "I said I shall return and I shall. I keep my word." I should have believed Edlyn, who said, "I do not think you will be returning." Edlyn is smarter than I had expected!
There are minor errors in the text; I will attempt to PM a list to Aralinn.
| ZabuzasGirl chapter 1 . 10/8/2013
Update immediately, please!
| cherryorpeach chapter 15 . 9/28/2013
I actually legit teared up when I read he was her brother.
| cherryorpeach chapter 1 . 9/28/2013
What the hell? Where the heck was I?! This was published in 2010, I browse through Lord of the Rings archives almost every day though, and I JUST found your story!
But f'real, this is just so good. I'm supposed to be studying, but that can wait. I need to know what happens in chapter 1.
| Saren-Dipety chapter 32 . 8/19/2013
Oh my gosh. This was AMAZING! I as crying when I thought Canye had died, you wrote that part so well.
It was an amazing end, you finished off every last desire I could have for this story. I absolutely loved it. You are an exceptional writer and you can't believe how much I look up too you. I-I can't even begin to explain how much I loved this story. There are no words good enough to describe it. I have tried over and over to find the words, but they just aren't there. If you ever wrote a book, I would read it. You are absolutely amazing.
And thank you again for giving me the inspiration to keep writing my story. *hugs*
| ImMelethLegolas chapter 32 . 8/11/2013
Aaawwww what a beautiful ending, very well done! Although I am utterly sad that this story is finished... it really is my absolute favorite LOTR story ever!
The whole concept of vampires in middle earth captured me from the beginning, and as Im Meleth Legolas/I Love Legolas AND love vampires this was the perfect tale for me!
The fact that your writing is amazingly good; the way you describe things makes one feel as if there; made this fic the best I've read here on fanfiction, and I do not belive I've come across a not published writer as talented as you!
I really, REALLY encourage you to write a novel for publishing, there is not a doubt in me that you would succeed as a fulltime writer!
| Tory chapter 32 . 8/8/2013
Gah I couldn't do anything but smile as I read this :) I am so glad that you did a Tolkien wedding rather than a 'normal' wedding; it added something a little more special to it, and it was just adorable! You can never have too much fluff, and it was all just perfect!
| ToryIsConfusedDotCom chapter 31 . 8/2/2013
OMG IT WAS PERFECT! Oh I'm all emotional :') poor Eomer, by the way :'( I really liked how you added the letter from Thranduil, and the way Legolas emerged was just perfect! Gah I loved this so much! I am so sad to finally see this come to an end! :'( perhaps we could have a few short one-shot type chapter on the end of their life together in Calithil? Sweet, fluffy kind of bits :3 just an idea. Congratulations for finishing a truly magnificent story that I have adored from the first sentence I read. I have looked forward to every update, and they shall now be sorely missed!
Well done you wonderful person!
| ToryIsConfusedDotCom chapter 29 . 7/28/2013
OMG this was amazing! The new detail in the second half was just incredible! I couldn't take my eyes off the screen! Amazing!
p.s. I had to review the previous chapter as it said I had already posted a review for chapter 29
| ImMelethLegolas chapter 30 . 7/20/2013
A great chapter as always! And I am sad it is over again... I don't think it is to short (well... your chapters are ALWAYS to short since I read them so fast) or to hasty. Although I would have prefered a different end for Eglanon...
Love this story, PLEEEEAAAASE don't have it end just yet *pleading on my bare knees*