|Reviews for Becoming Whole|
| Neko-fire demon tempest chapter 8 . 10/13/2012
Well way to go Seth, tell her while she's in a hospital that way you don't have to take her later.
| k chapter 8 . 8/18/2012
really i cant described so beautifull
| RCCBlack chapter 8 . 1/15/2012
| lemmonpie chapter 7 . 1/7/2011
as always you give me good material to begin with! I love this story and I love to be it's beta!
| Mrs Sorbo chapter 6 . 11/6/2010
:( Please update
Your story is awesomes, i love your characters :)
| lemmonpie chapter 6 . 11/5/2010
greeeeeat chapter sweets! I'm sorry it took me so long to beta!
| invader13panda chapter 6 . 11/5/2010
more peaze ? :)
| bundleb chapter 3 . 10/21/2010
| Miss Book chapter 5 . 8/9/2010
Oh no, their perfect for each other!
How ever will we find conflict?
I don't even care, if the rest of the story is just like this or anywhere near as good, I'm in.
| lemmonpie chapter 5 . 8/9/2010
Great chapter as always! I only make it a bit better, you know, you already give me good material to beging with :P
| lemmonpie chapter 4 . 8/5/2010
Aw thank you!Joan Jett rules and I liked her way before Kirsten played her!
| lemmonpie chapter 3 . 8/4/2010
Hey! I'm so glad to be this story's beta too, sweetie! the chapters are great, I just polish them up a bit! and thanks for sending your readers to "Here Comes Your Man" I'll update it soon!
| Dimetriaj04 chapter 3 . 8/3/2010
Hey Im a newbie reader. This is my first time reading a Seth story and its pretty cute so far :)
| MindEqualBlown chapter 2 . 8/2/2010
Beautiful, just beautiful
please update soon I enjoyed this so much
| HeyXimeHere chapter 2 . 7/28/2010
wow! i love it! :DD