Reviews for Descent
JustJolola chapter 1 . 5/10/2013
Well, this was a sad and sweet story. I liked how you set it out into little paragraphs. This could easily have been the skeleton of a 23-chapter story, but I think you boiled each part down to the most relevant things and captured what you were trying to get across brilliantly. It's perfect as is, and very well written.

Of course, the overall tone of the piece is pretty gloomy, but there are hints of happiness and there's a sense of realness that makes it believable. It's very unique, well done. :)
BelieverofManyThings chapter 1 . 4/17/2012
Fantastic story and really interesting to read :)
TreeWithoutWood chapter 1 . 8/28/2011
So beautiful ;_; i honestly can't believe you dont have more reviews.
TheBlindBandit999 chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
hm, I'm not sure what to think it's sad about the girl but then the ending is a little weird...
Princess of the Rogues chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
That was beautiful, thank you. I don't have much to say in the way of critiques, it was really good!

Looking forward to more from you,

Princess
sheriff stilinski chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
LOVED IT. :)
X3MonochromeX3 chapter 1 . 8/8/2010
Sad, but i liked it!13
Ciel In A Dress chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
Wow... that was sad. Really sad. But very very good!
Artemis Day chapter 1 . 7/26/2010
That was really good. You are a very good writer, so don't stop.

Ciao!