|Reviews for Stay|
| dpennell007 chapter 6 . 12/12/2016
I would have loved this even if it turned out to be just a one-shot, but the added chapters were a bonus! The watching, but pretending to be not watching each other bits almost killed me. I couldn't wait MORE than they couldn't wait. Dang. Excellent work!
| mindluver chapter 6 . 11/7/2015
Really great. Thanks for sharing.
| mindluver chapter 5 . 11/7/2015
| mindluver chapter 4 . 11/7/2015
| mindluver chapter 3 . 11/7/2015
Whew...I need a ciggy
| mindluver chapter 2 . 11/7/2015
| mindluver chapter 1 . 11/7/2015
| Hare and Heron chapter 6 . 8/25/2015
Really, now. 2015 and yet you are still getting reviews! Congratulations!
I really enjoyed this story (I would honestly say that this one and White Dress are my two favorites right now), you know? Though it had me feeling like it would have a sad, sad ending (I can't quite stomach those). Also, I personally enjoy the parentheses, and I don't think you used too many. They are alright when you use them to provide a certain 'something more' that adds to the feeling and, again personally, I find that I enjoyed the 'something more' that you created in my mind.
Thank you very much for writing!
| Fanfic-Critic1805 chapter 6 . 4/14/2015
This was very, very cute and sinfully sexy. However, relationships with an age difference of more than 10 years IRL kind of creep me out XD. There weren't too many grammar errors but there were a couple of issues with addition of unnecessary words/letters in this chapter and in the first one. Also there were times when you used an excessive amount of parentheses where italics would have worked just as well and looked better. Just out of curiosity, why did you choose to go with them just noticing each other for the first time instead of some seemingly unrequited crush or pining? That aspect of their relationship really set this fic apart from other older/younger,student/professor pairings so nice job. I really enjoyed reading this fic so your overall rating is 4.5/5
| jackson 179 chapter 6 . 8/4/2014
Loved it...amazing no other words
When is next chapter coming up?
| Annie Butts chapter 1 . 12/1/2013
| SagaDevotee chapter 6 . 10/25/2013
LOVELY! sexy and romantic.
| SagaDevotee chapter 5 . 10/25/2013
| SagaDevotee chapter 4 . 10/25/2013
| SagaDevotee chapter 3 . 10/25/2013
Edward's just getting braver and braver. I like it!