|Reviews for Laughter of the Broken|
| zafnak chapter 14 . 6/11
It isn't often an author wakes up from a bender, reads his creation and says "What the fuck did I just write?" like you just did LOL. Your self criticisms, while a bit harsh, are on target. Sort of. I can see how things spiraled out of control as you chased ever more good reviews by adding more of the things people thought were great and hilarious until the whole house of cards started to collapse under it's own weight.
But hey, you can always explain it away by claiming temporary insanity- I doubt anyone who has ever read this story would disagree :-)
But seriously, would you really not object to someone adopting this tale?
| zafnak chapter 13 . 6/11
I think you are starting to lose the thread of this story with all this.. random crazy popping up this chapter. I could forgive Anko and the big rock and maybe even the "This is Sparta!" But Shino the bug user bustin out his lazar was just a bit too much. Naruto's insanity seems to be developing (or devolving) into pure Freakazoid goofiness. If it had started out that way, sure, no problem, but we seem to have lost sight of the sadistic, psycho, Joker Naruto the last couple of chapters. Perhaps you thought you went a bit too far in the brutality of the Naruto/Hinata match and wanted to lighten things up a tad?
Oh, and by the way, were those cross cut saw blades Tenten was throwing at Skihamaru?
| zafnak chapter 12 . 6/11
Ahem. I'm not sure who is more insane- you or your version of Naruto.
However... Kudos to you for creating this..twisted version of Hinata. Honestly, this could have actually been the way she turned out if she had snapped in canon. The fact that Joker Naruto humiliated her in such a beat down fashion after taking everything she could throw at him and laughing all the while is nothing short of disturbing.
But it seems Naruto isn't just like the Joker. No he seems more of a fusion of Joker and Freakazoid, what with all the crazy stuff he sometimes does LOL
| zafnak chapter 7 . 6/11
To answer the Author's Rant (if you were being halfway serious) is Team Identity. Team 8 wear jackets/coats. Hinata because she's body shy and the big coat hides her developing curves. Kiba because that jacket is something his clan wears a lot and the hood is handy for carrying Akamaru around in. Shino wears a trenchcoat because of ..well., bugs. It is an Aburame thing.
Team 10 has pierced ears because that's Asuma's deal. His genin get pierced as a sign that they passed his test. Maito Gai's team would all be wearing green spandex outfits like him if he had his way, but Neji and Tenten flat out refused- Lee was the only one to do so. The fact that Kakashi's team has nothing to identify them as a team speaks of how dysfunctional they are as a team
| SevvyOmahgawsh chapter 5 . 6/10
xD that omake is awesome! xD wtf is wrong with me... i think i have a fucked up brain.
brain: yes you have a fucked up brain
how do you know?
brain: ummmmm...because i ate a pencil
wtf man why
ok...back the fuck off brain.,...anyways, bai!
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/9
XD I loved the part where he was sleeping in blood curled up with a villager limb
| Maruda chapter 14 . 1/6
I just loved this plot twist fanfiction, I love reading about insane characters!
| Harley shadow chapter 3 . 12/19/2017
Damn this story is good asf it reminds me of myself except I didn't kill anyone...yet but the dead eyes and the people treating him like trash is the same like me eheheehhehehe it was pretty fun to treat them like trash and break a few bones too
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/16/2017
its quite nice how naruto is crazed like that just add a part where naruto beats the living shit out of sakura and i would be in love with this fic:)
| Thescaucegod chapter 7 . 11/2/2017
Don't you HATE teachers that are on your case just to be assholes
| Guest chapter 5 . 9/1/2017
The song is everywhere I go by Hollywood undead
| it's just another primate chapter 6 . 9/3/2017
God, this naruto reminds ne of Franken Stein from soul eater XD they seem so alike. Perhaps naruto is a bit more crazy but still.
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/27/2017
Wait in the first chapter you said no HAREM YOU LIED TO ME!
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/27/2017
WTF! I know it was a little cracked like near the end but it had potential to redeem itself but the harem was a bad idea
| guest chapter 14 . 5/23/2017
gave me a good laugh for wat it was worth