|Reviews for The Collection of CastOffs|
| Koreko-Messo chapter 3 . 8/5/2010
That was...depressing. In all the best ways!
I really like how you portray Snape here - it's very true to his character and you captured his voice, at this age, perfectly. The naivety, the immaturity that increases with age, everything. Even his "love" for Lily and his utter hate for James.
Lily and Severus' 'break-up' was heartbreaking in it's reality - since we know that this is probably their last conversation, it makes what they said to each other more harsh.
But, I really like how you had James be awake for the whole thing and have him be aware of their relationship, it's a new way of looking at the "triangle" as it is sometimes referred to. I think this is the closed view as to what the canon relationship between James, Lily, and Severus was like.
| elfinmyth chapter 2 . 7/26/2010
wow, I absolutely loved this chapter! HPLV, dark Harry, sinister dolls...not to mention Severus dieing -do you spell that this way?-
keep it up!
| rosiegirl chapter 2 . 7/25/2010
Oh this one really needs more! Liked it