|Reviews for Immortal|
| dragonball256 chapter 10 . 2/15
Wow this story was incredible. I love how you followed cannon for the most part but when Naruto got really serious and angry you had him wipe everyone out ;)
I like his backstory too with Sasuke betraying him again and the first Avatar confronting him.
| JimmyHall24 chapter 10 . 2/10
| LuckyBlackCat777 chapter 10 . 1/8
I wasn't actually expecting that, nice "plot twist".
You sure write an alternate ending.
| afi123 chapter 10 . 1/6
it was nice
| ravik123123 chapter 2 . 12/26/2014
Just want to say he wouldn't be considered a pedophile but instead an ephebophile
| pinky9292 chapter 10 . 11/12/2014
Awesome ending brilliant story
| bramastra chapter 2 . 9/28/2014
| Shinigami Merchant chapter 1 . 9/21/2014
As far as the prologue goes...wow its a really nice setup and gives an atmospere that is both eerie and unsettling, it is brilliant XD
| Tsumujikaze Yumi chapter 10 . 7/11/2014
Mmm That was a bit strange.. But naruto was very great ! I would have loved to see him heal azula of her fears. Yup your story is so sad :3
| 1066wthec chapter 10 . 7/10/2014
nice ending... it was actually good...if a little wierd, but still satisfying.
| SaucyHandles chapter 10 . 6/20/2014
Epic story, really loved it!
| usuallyforgotten chapter 10 . 5/27/2014
all in all a great fanfic and finally a dark evil naruto fic with a ending that doesn't make you want to kill the writer. At least in my opinion it lets you know that it's finished and you know there probably won't be a sequel. Good job
| Guest chapter 10 . 4/30/2014
MWAHAHA! BURN THEM ALL! FLAME AND ASHES!
| Guest chapter 10 . 4/22/2014
everyone like a happy ending :-)
| Nightmare daniell61 chapter 1 . 2/18/2014
ok im excited about this one.. i got a good feelin' dont dissapoint me with not finishing it :D