Reviews for Immortal
kowtang chapter 10 . 2/12
Cool story,at least this story have all it need to be a good one. :D
Oblivion196 chapter 10 . 5/12/2016
I actually kinda wish it was a longer story. I loved it.
Daniell61 chapter 10 . 12/16/2015
Great fabulous story!

-nightmare daniell61
Adrimore chapter 10 . 11/18/2015
Wow this was the best crossover I've ever read and with my favorite characters!
battle manga chapter 10 . 9/30/2015
Finally the gray has won.
World Maker 777 chapter 2 . 7/27/2015
Ok might be different in your story but I'm pretty sure azula is 16 or so in the anime... just throwin that out there
World Maker 777 chapter 1 . 7/27/2015
the first avatar's name was Wan
Lewis-Sama chapter 10 . 7/21/2015
blassreitter chapter 10 . 7/15/2015
Lol, never thought that she would swing that way. Well it is justice to end the avatar as that is beyong the shinobi world.
blassreitter chapter 7 . 7/15/2015
It more sounds that Kiore is a evil, jealous that Naruto is stronger and believed the rumors that he is a demon and never met him in person.
Lone The Dark Hearted Wolf chapter 10 . 6/18/2015
Yes happy but twisted
MichealMyers chapter 10 . 3/26/2015
I love this fucking book so much so much fun
dragonball256 chapter 10 . 2/15/2015
Wow this story was incredible. I love how you followed cannon for the most part but when Naruto got really serious and angry you had him wipe everyone out ;)

I like his backstory too with Sasuke betraying him again and the first Avatar confronting him.
JimmyHall24 chapter 10 . 2/10/2015
Jashl Xxify chapter 10 . 1/8/2015
I wasn't actually expecting that, nice "plot twist".

You sure write an alternate ending.
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