Reviews for Lust
Triste chapter 1 . 2/14/2011
That last line is made of win! Great work on fitting something so porntastic into such a compact little fic. It works incredibly well (and nicely shows your skills as a writer). There will never be enough Crow/Yusei in this fandom. That's why I'm going to have to rec this fic on my LJ. Then more people will be able to appreciate it and share the love. 3
Guest chapter 1 . 2/11/2011
LostOzian chapter 1 . 8/4/2010
I wanna say, good story, but I don't think this is rated right. It's not very explicit, but since T-plus isn't a rating, I think you should go M. It's more so some prude doesn't come along, flag you, and get you in trouble.

As for the fic, I like how you sort of made a drabble-snapshot out of what most people would do a full lemon. It makes it seem more like this is something that happens a lot, even though it might not happen the way did this one time.

Overall, I liked it. But I really do want to warn you about the M thing. Fewer people will see it if it's M, but that way, the only people who find it will be looking for it. -LostOzian
Dragon C. Chan chapter 1 . 7/27/2010