|Reviews for A Ritual Farewell|
| Rokimbo chapter 1 . 3/7/2013
| Celebwen Telcontar chapter 1 . 8/10/2010
Very good, beautiful story! I loved it!
| NWHS chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
Really sweet story. Glad to stumble upon a fellow J and D fic writer. I'm gonna check out your other stories. Nice work capturing the budding romance.
| NHPW chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
This is wonderful. It's adorable, funny, sweet; a nice little piece of "might-have-been". Normally I don't like AU/off-canon, but you sold this from the first paragraphs, and I was hooked. Delenn is a smidge OOC, but still believable (if that makes sense.) Sheridan is well portrayed in two aspects. First, we see him as your average, every-day human male with a crush, making him extremely believable - I laughed at the "Do not be a dick" part. You had me hook, line and sinker at that point.
And second, you capture the eager, relatively care-free Season 2 Sheridan (who is almost an entirely different person from, say, Season 5 Sheridan) to a T. Now you actually have me wondering whether it would have been better if he'd just kissed her back then, before things got all f'd up.
Thanks for writing this!
| Nyt Yanse chapter 1 . 7/26/2010
Ooo so nice... This is OOC for Delenn but that's why I love fanfiction. A wonderful read.