|Reviews for Anthology of Melancholy Disasters|
| Saku And Haru chapter 1 . 3/10/2014
your fanfics are awesome! i love ALL of them!
| SakuraHerem chapter 2 . 1/14/2014
that was the hottest lemon I have ever read
| hama431 chapter 2 . 12/25/2013
| ThunderWolf1324 chapter 2 . 10/25/2013
| Icha'je chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
oh my goodness... I was crying so hard read this story. Sooo...sad...
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/3/2012
:D love it
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/3/2012
Aww it made me cry
| deadtotheworld chapter 1 . 8/3/2011
Wow, just wow
| Irui chapter 2 . 5/23/2011
LOLOL. this is so funny - esp the phone call that alienated Sasuke's entire police force XD
smexy scenes too X
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/4/2011
omg...this is so good...i cried when i read this chapter...sob sob...pls update faster?im dying to read this... :)
| Lady Miel Cacao chapter 2 . 3/26/2011
Sakura's sooo lucky! I hope to see another chapter!
| another.creative.lover chapter 2 . 3/20/2011
(laughs) Omigod... XD That's HOT. I think this is the sexiest workplace sex I've ever read in my entire FREAKIN' LIFE! :D And I LOVE IT.
(swoons) The sex scene was HAWT... And Sasuke definitely is a veteran of sex. XD (swoons) I love how there are writer's out there, writing porn scenes-er, EROTIC LITERATURE! and are still virgins. XD Those are the BEST. Especially girls like Sakura. Who is now no longer a virgin. (laughs)
I have to say that this was my most favorite one shot type thing. And AfterSchool Rhaphsodies. :D I LOVE ALL YOUR WORKS, YOU FRIGGIN' GENIUS! Ferserious. XD You're so smarticle. :3
The only thing was that I didn't like how Ino was the bitch. XD Why not KARIN? XD But I can still see Ino.
| another.creative.lover chapter 1 . 3/20/2011
(cries) I had to bring a tissue box here... D: SASUKE-KUN WHY DID YOU DIE? (cries again and blows nose into tissue)
| writingtitan chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
I really like this fic. I'm not sure if this was on purpose or not; if it is then cool but
"I never said that you were to ( moved it down to the bottom of the next few paragraphs.)
Again, the famous Uchiha smirk graced his lips, but it soon turned into a small, weak smile, one that she had never seen before.
And it was specifically for her, and her alone.
His expression in itself was soft, softer than anything that she had ever seen, and contained many emotions unseen and unexpressed.
But she knew then and there what they all meant.
Sasuke was always one for demands, so when he uttered one, it wasn't all that surprising; but what he had asked of her, as a whole?
It brought the tears faster than she could prevent them.
"Sakura... Kiss me..."
And so she did as he asked of her, knowing full well that this was to be their last, forevermore.
Sakura carefully cradled his upper body on her lap, leaning down so that she could press her trembling lips to his in a soft, chaste kiss; his hand wound up behind her head, pulling her closer as he savoured in her warmth—he no longer had any to provide.
His tongue brushed against her bottom lip, the pinkette instantly bending to his silent demand as she parted her lips, feeling the slow, probing intrusion of his moist muscle tapping against the inner confines of her cavern; it wasn't hungry and demanding, like they usually were, fuck, it wasn't even possessive.
It was simply affectionate.
die for me! If anything, now that you've proven to me your point, you have to do something else for me too! You must live for me too! Do you understand, Uchiha Sasuke? You have to live for me! I won't have it any other way!"
So it goes from her saying something they kiss sentence continued. It could work, I was just wondering if it was intentional?
This is very well written. Well done. Keep up the great work!
| Cabbit and the Weasel chapter 2 . 2/15/2011
your writing makes me laugh! the sex was good...wait i sound like a perv O/O i meant the writing how it was written was amazing...my complements are perverted...your just an (excuse me for copywriting) awsomesauce writter