Reviews for My Indian son
Witchy Nike chapter 3 . 9/7/2013
And this is it? I'm not even sure what to think of it. This all went by very fast. I wish you would've took more time and written it out more, explaining it better, and, of course, making it longer.

Witchy Nike chapter 2 . 9/7/2013
Short. Very, very short. Maybe you could've took more time with this? Like...making it into a full story? I'm kinda worried you're rushin' things. But maybe you don't want it to be a full, blown out story. I dunno. It's kinda confusing.

Witchy Nike chapter 1 . 9/7/2013
First of all, I can't believe this is the only FanFic for this series. I love that series! So therefore there should be more Fics on it haha :)

Anyways...this wasn't bad. I could've took more time to make it flow a wee bit better. But I still liked it. I'm not sure it's a K Rating, but eh. It doesn't go into detail.

So, because I liked it, I'm gonna go read more! :)

Susan M. M chapter 1 . 3/2/2011
Is the narrator meant to be Laura or Jessie?