Reviews for Love Will Find Its Way
Guest chapter 7 . 1/11/2014
ahora esta historia me gusta aun mas.
felicidades, t ganaste mi aprobación
Guest chapter 6 . 1/11/2014
date prisa para poder terminar la historia con un hermoso final
Guest chapter 5 . 1/11/2014
me gusta pero...lo q no me gusta es q es tan corto. mas a prisa por favor
Guest chapter 4 . 1/11/2014
es muy linda la historia pero, mas rápido porfa si
Guest chapter 3 . 1/11/2014
oye me estas enojando. actualízalo de una buena vez pe
Guest chapter 2 . 1/11/2014
rápido actualiza pe
Guest chapter 1 . 1/11/2014
quien no odia la escuela, bueno t perdono por esta vez.
pero tarta de hacerlo rápido
Eliana C.S chapter 7 . 3/29/2013
WOOOOWWWW! Nice story, dude! Keep typing!
D chapter 3 . 12/21/2012
Its , "Shut up."said Skipper,still blushing.
Not, "shut up." said Skipper,still blushes.

See the difference?
•Start speech with CAPITAL a letter
•It's still BLUSHING not still BLUSHES

Here's a more improved sentence
"Shut up!"whined Skipper, trying to sound strict yet still blushing.

See the improvements?
•Better punctuation-( S ! )
•A better word then said,whined,-( Said is DEAD )
•Added more detail to the sentence
•Blushing instead of Blushes
Try using THIS example in your next story,it may make a difference! :D
A few gr chapter 3 . 12/11/2012
Story:like it
grammer:...uhh,'s not bad?...I,um,I like ur title?

Skipper Belmort:That bad?
Me:What? Nooooo...

Blank wrong
(x) right

Test results:

Skipper Belmort:Really?!
Me:•whispers to crowd•smile,comment nicely,wave and back away slowly!
Everyone:Great story! :D •waves and backs way slowly•
Skipper Belmort:-_-


But the grammer is a bugger for me
Skilene4eva chapter 7 . 10/7/2012
Love da storyyyyyyy!
Skilene4eva chapter 7 . 8/30/2012
That was SO sweet! I swear I nearly cried but if I did my iPad would of broke! :D
lovingSkipper chapter 7 . 8/3/2010
Awesome! I loved this story! Keep it up!
CayennePeppr chapter 7 . 8/3/2010
I loved the end, to no end. B-but why did it have to end? sniff... Well, if it has to end, at least it ended on a happy note.
wibblywobblydeductionywuctiony chapter 7 . 8/3/2010
Awwz! I LOVED the ending. But it's over?(whiney voice) awwww! Keep it up! I absolutely loved the entire thing!
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