Reviews for BBS Outtake for FGB: Mac's Cheese
Guest chapter 1 . 1/20/2014
Well, this one was a miss for me. Not my cup of tea.
Lona W. Hall chapter 1 . 11/10/2012
Cool outtake! I'm surprised no one asked for Bflan, Bswan, as two physical people...and Edward...heck throw in Jasper and Emmett too and then have Rose and Alice catch them at the end...lol Love your world!
SagaDevotee chapter 1 . 6/26/2011
Oh of my all time favs...so eff'd up! oxoxo
LauralHilll chapter 1 . 2/3/2011
oh my sweet fuck, how much do I goddamnedly love emmett.
Mothermeow5 chapter 1 . 1/22/2011
That may very well have been the hottest lemon I have ever read...wowie!
crzy4music chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
Oh. My. GOD this was amazing. Shit the only thing that could have made this better is more Jasper. Admittedly I have a Jackson-fuckhawt-Rathbone thing. Mm damn. You're an amazing writer :)
stephsmith chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
greatest outtake ever
WolverinesClause chapter 1 . 11/17/2010
Hilarious and disturbing! Some great lines i would have expected to come across but never have, leading to greater lines: "Baby, please? I'm from Texas, you know. Everything's bigger in Texas."

" buckle proudly confirmed that "Everything's Bigger in Texas!" It was nice that his cock could share a slogan with the Lone Star State.

I'll never mess with a Texan again. I had no idea of the kind of heat you were packing underneath your belt, Jizzy. This is a cock of a different calibre.

Lol

Then when Edwards lips started buzzing- I'm thinking she could have said, "could you do that while i'm sitting on your face?" However the ninja tongue is priceless.

Golden freaking lemons! I need to read more of your stuff.
DoUTrustMe chapter 1 . 11/12/2010
ZOMG! Insanity! Love the Texan slogans. So many strange lines (yes, that's a compliment). And the turkey! How could I forget the turkey? I want to suck your toe. That is all.
NeverOkayIPromise chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
Whooo...Loved the way you just kept saying the word outtake it made me laugh. Always knew Alice and Edward were close but sharing Jasper-the-new-cum-bucket that's just a little far *Insert crazed laughter* :L. Another great outtake. Loved it!

xxx
Amanda Wilder chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
Ooh, was it wrong of me to want Edward to suck the venom out of Bella while Jakesie was fucking her? There are some seriously funny lines here, I love all the back and forth about Jasper's cock! "I had no idea of the kind of heat you were packing underneath your belt, Jizzy. This is a cock of a different calibre." I knew those vamps were light in their loafers...Jake's responses are HILarious!
lamb comma sick masochistic chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
"At least they're getting along." From the book of life.
NicciB23 chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
Honestly words fail me right now...

Maybe I am as fucked up in the head as you and Mac cause I loved it and want to read more! I was curious as to what you were going to do with a frozen turkey but you did it and it was Hilarious.
rhythm junkie chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
"Nah, don't Love me, Elton John" Brilliant.
danna0724 chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
BF~

WOW that fuckery was def Mac... that totally had her written all over it!

Could throw in... the being filled in 3 ways... from hunter (Gin) it's called "AirTight" BWAHAHAHAHA!

THAT WAS FUCKING GREAT THO... for something I shouldn't read, of course...

So, you and Kate and Mac all got nom'd for golden lemons... fucking sweet! You ALL have mad skills! I love me some Renward and DILFward, and Ryeward...

Love ya girly!

danna
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