Reviews for White Blank Page
Born in 20th Century chapter 1 . 3/3
This is a brilliant beginning; please tell me that you plan to finish this at some point? I just know I'll love this story, if only you could complete it...please? I see that it's been over a year since you last updated so that seems highly unlikely, but still - it'd be wonderfully fantastically amazingly awesome if you were to continue this brilliantly amazing story! Cheers! :D
RediscoveredPokeyHoles chapter 7 . 2/6
Eeep!
M chapter 14 . 1/10
I wish your story was real and that every fat girl gets her own Paul.. or some version of him..
Thank you for writing this
Silver chapter 15 . 1/4
Ok now I wanna slap Renee. Does that mean Paul will stop phasing? I'm so excited for the next chapter you really know how to type in your readers.
Silver chapter 12 . 1/4
Jojo-To little too late

Demi Lavato-Fix a heart
untertasse chapter 15 . 12/31/2013
Really love your story. Paul treats Bella like crap, but I like how you wrote out their conflicts. She doesn't just jump to forgive him, but they truly try to work out their differences and grow for each other. I like that.
I'm a little concerned about the last line, though. If Paul is free from the pack and freed from having to phase, does that mean he is free from the imprint too? Does his claiming of Bella still hold?
Hope you have another chapter in store for us!
babyvfan chapter 4 . 12/24/2013
Nope not yet. Still think he's an ass. Hope Sam or ones the guys can knock sense into him
babyvfan chapter 3 . 12/24/2013
I think Paul should tone down the asshole facade. He really get be so rude sometimes
babyvfan chapter 1 . 12/24/2013
Wow. Just...wow. And I can already tell this is going to be a very interesting story.
Rock'N'RollTwins chapter 7 . 11/20/2013
Run the other way, make him work for her trust!
Rock'N'RollTwins chapter 6 . 11/20/2013
Awesome! I'm kinda liking Paul now, still think he's an asshat. Pretty good how Bella didn't just give in right away and put up a fight until she couldn't anymore
Rock'N'RollTwins chapter 5 . 11/19/2013
*stab* *stab* there there poor poor Paul don't worry I won't hurt you, just a poke in the eye with a needle.
Rock'N'RollTwins chapter 4 . 11/19/2013
No worries Bella I'll cut his balls for you and make a necklace and mail it to him ;)
Rock'N'RollTwins chapter 3 . 11/19/2013
I am about ready to punch the fck out of Paul! Hopefully Bella won't give in so easily
apolasik chapter 15 . 10/13/2013
I just found your story and red through in n one afternoon. Please update soon! I can't wait to see what happens with bella and Paul now that he is free from the pack
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