Reviews for On Baby Detail
aecul chapter 1 . 5/9/2011
Oh my word, that was so cute! My parents have done that to me ("Lucy, we're going somewhere, have some bonding time with your baby brother"). It's a pain. But my little siblings are the most important things to me in the world.

So, aww, that was adorable, it had a lot of heart to it, and I related to it so much. Not the assassin part, lol, which I kinda expected to be dumb (no offense, it just seemed random) but it worked and was actually pretty awesome.

"walking was going to work"


Wonderful, stunning job.
jkc chapter 1 . 1/8/2011
Jinlongbao chapter 1 . 11/26/2010
This is cute...I should think Mai cares for her baby brother too :)
Noshintheawesomeone chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
I liked it. I normally read your x-men stories but I found this today. I think you really got Mai's personality down.

-Later days
Lord Shade chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
Glad to see that someone finally did a Tom-Tom fic. Keep up the good work.
AnnaAza chapter 1 . 7/26/2010
I love this! Like you said, there aren't too many Mai and Tom Tom fics out here! It's pretty great; I love how you showed Mai as a loving sister and not as a bored, sighing person. That gets old sometimes.