Reviews for Capitulation
AzumaTokaku05 chapter 10 . 9/1/2017
Your story is gold. Pure gold. I've only gotten to the 7th (or so) chapter and I'm already addicted. I swear you're good enough to write a book someday. I love the description and the way you alternate perspectives! Your plot isn't the basic one, it keeps the audience guessing for what'll happen next. I also love your take on their relationship! You're my first and probably only Inception writer who's stories I adore. I truly hope that you keep writing and developing your skills (although I think you're a brilliant writer now). Keep up the amazing work, although this is a really late reply... :)
Guest chapter 20 . 11/13/2016
This is so very good, such a lovely story. The ending when Ari sees Arthur again is so cathartic, it's wonderful. And the very ending is so poetic and lovely, it gives me this ache in my chest. What a gorgeous story. I'll definitely be reading this again
Guest chapter 19 . 11/13/2016
Whoa, that was really intense and suspenseful. I think you cut off the sections switching between Arthur and Ariadne very well, it had a good pace to it. I could see it like a movie cutting between scenes
Guest chapter 14 . 11/13/2016
Guest chapter 12 . 11/13/2016
This is very suspenseful and exciting!
Guest chapter 9 . 11/12/2016
This is really good and I loved how the whole team was taking care of Ariadne, it was really sweet
caspasta chapter 1 . 5/26/2016
The borrowing of "Dawson" reminds me of Titanic. :)
xBlownxAwayx chapter 21 . 11/18/2015
browncoatbroklyn chapter 8 . 5/11/2015
Thank you for including the stops and being aware of your readers. I've enjoyed this story and the details you've added. Kudos for the logic behind Ariadne's nickname.
zuzka chapter 21 . 10/15/2014
CrimsonFlarez chapter 21 . 4/23/2014
I read this in like two days and it was one of the best stories I've ever read! Thank you for this wonderful story!
LizzieOktambe chapter 1 . 4/8/2014
This is one of the best stories I've ever seen. So, so beautiful!
I just... can't find the right words to describe it, but it is just outstanding.
Every Arthur/Ariadne scene made my heart clench and my stomach doing strange flip flops, and the goosebumps on my back. Yeah... that's exactly how you wrote it.
SurpriseKitty chapter 3 . 4/4/2014
And the connection for this chapter would be... Pokémon! Arthur and Connor's relationship seems just like Ash and Gary's in Pokémon! Gary is Oak's grandson and both he and Ash were taught by him just like Connor and Arthur were by Mitchell in your story! Awesome job :)
SurpriseKItty chapter 1 . 4/4/2014
Was that a Titanic reference I smelled in there? ;D With Ariadne being like Rose when she was asked for her name and she said "Dawson"? Because it sure felt like it!
Guest chapter 8 . 3/28/2014
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