|Reviews for Capitulation|
| ju1i3Oh chapter 20 . 2/26
It was absolutely amazing! ...total left me on my toes throughout the whole fic, so amazed at how you wrote everyone in character! I fell in love with ur action scenes and those Arthur and Ari scenes as well
Definitely going to my favorites & job well done! :)
| The Disappeared chapter 21 . 1/19
This was an amazingly awesome fic. And I don't say that sort of thing lightly - I'm a picky fanfiction reader, and to please me you need to have consistent characters, realistic (or what the author convinces me is realistic and a good author can convince me of most anything) plots, actual grammar and spelling, and generally basically be a story that's the same quality I'd find in a book store. Picky, as I said, and most of the fanfiction world lets me down. But this story was really something. It kept me reading, even as I started to get a migraine from looking at the computer screen so long (I read this in one beautiful sitting). And might I just say, as a woman and a general human being, although this isn't related to the story I found myself saying "Amen! Preach it, girl!" to your authors note about rape. Giant props for that. This story is now on my favorites list (which is a very selective place, given that it only includes those stories that have stood out as great for me over my almost decade of fanfiction reading). Wonderful job - I'll have to check out some of your other stories some time! (After I finish my current Inception binge - this fic left me with a giant craving for reading more Ariadne/Arthur!)
| Kam74 chapter 20 . 1/15
OH MY GOSH YOU ARE SUCH AN INCREDIBLE AUTHOR. PLEASE WRITE FOREVER. OH MY GOSH! I love Arthur [and Joseph Gordan-Levitt of course. He is my future husband XD ] so much in this Fanfiction. I would have given you a review for every chapter, but I ho early say that I couldn't stop reading. This as just such a beautiful Fanfiction. I only saw Inception for the first time two days ago [I know...] and it's just blown me away with awesome. It is my new favorite movie and your story has just made me love it all the more. You have such a talent for getting characters down. I feel as though Arthur was completely spot on, and while at times she did seem a little too emotional [but who am I to know, I've never been in these situations], Ariadne was incredible as well. I just can't believe how lucky I was to discover this Fanfiction. You are so amazing! I LOVE THIS!
| InkWeaverabc chapter 20 . 12/30/2013
You know what? This fic is brilliant. Sheer freaking brilliant. Well done. I loved it. This chapter - Eames was so wonderful in this chapter. It made me sad there hadn't been more of him, but you know? No, there was just the right amount of him. And just the right amount of everyone, drawn with such perfect strokes you made me believe they were real. So well done you, you brilliant brilliant writer. Although I did see something like the first ever typo in this one. " looks undeniable sombre", I think should be "undeniably", but you know what, does it matter? Because this fic was undeniably excellet and I recieved undeniable pleasure and Arthur/Ariadne feels (dammit, you make me otp them) from it, so thank you.
Oh, and I forgot to say a) I love the candle poem, and b) I'm from London.
Thanks again! :)
| InkWeaverabc chapter 18 . 12/30/2013
Ugh, that was adorable. Simply adorable. Thank you.
| InkWeaverabc chapter 17 . 12/30/2013
NO NO NO NO No - Alice and kissing and brielle and no no no whyyy? Just so you know, I love this chapter. Probabaly one of my very faves. And not just because of the kissing. Of which I have decided there is not enough xDno. Also because I love Will and Brielle.
| InkWeaverabc chapter 16 . 12/30/2013
AHH SO MUCH DRAMA. SO MUCH. I really really hate Connor, as well.
| InkWeaverabc chapter 14 . 12/28/2013
The fluff. Sweet merciful heavens, the FLUFF! Wonderful wonderful kiss. And the ending KILLED me, I swear. It was so beautiful and lovely and hot.
| InkWeaverabc chapter 9 . 12/28/2013
Yay! Go Protective!Arthur! Loving it xD
| InkWeaverabc chapter 5 . 12/28/2013
Ah, I take it back. She's had more practise. Loved the shopping, wasn't sure what to make of Eames, final scene very sweet :)
| InkWeaverabc chapter 4 . 12/28/2013
The development of their relationship is really excellent in this chapter. Whilst I think it is rather hard to swallow that she learns to dance successfully in one afternoon/evening, I'm looking forward to the party :)
| InkWeaverabc chapter 3 . 12/28/2013
I like Mitchell xD I like him a lot. Especiqlly his parting comments!
| InkWeaverabc chapter 1 . 12/28/2013
Ahhh :) this was really good! A really well-explored and IC representation of their characters, and the balance of their relationship. Good stuff :)
| PhoenixFlame121 chapter 18 . 10/12/2013
Wow okay again, I love how you portrayed Arthur when he woke Ariadne from her bad dream, you didn't make him all frantic but kept him totally in character... loved it!
| PhoenixFlame121 chapter 9 . 10/12/2013
..wow.. you wrote this perfectly. Only on chapter nine and as a new Inception lover, I can honestly say you write Arthur perfect, and it's extremely difficult to write a character constistently. I absolutely love this story so far :D