Reviews for Sumdac Sin
Silverwind the White Draconess chapter 7 . 2/25/2014
Awesome story!
Autobotgirl2234 chapter 1 . 9/29/2013
GeekyGamerCat chapter 4 . 12/20/2012
so screamer loves Rachel i thought so.
Shizuka Taiyou chapter 7 . 2/28/2011
It might've been corny. But it was a good kind of corny.

Shizuka Taiyou chapter 6 . 2/28/2011
Darn the awsomeness.

Shizuka Taiyou chapter 5 . 2/28/2011
Not good not good at all.

Shizuka Taiyou chapter 4 . 2/28/2011
Fartcream (Copyrighted nickname) is a psycotic afthole.

Shizuka Taiyou chapter 3 . 2/28/2011
Rach is a stubborn glitch. But aren't all girls stubborn like that when it comes to guys being stupid?

Shizuka Taiyou chapter 2 . 2/28/2011
Total sweetness.

Shizuka Taiyou chapter 1 . 2/28/2011
Total awsomeness. Can't wait for more.

The Fox Familiar chapter 1 . 12/1/2010
I'd hope you revise this, because instead of actually introducing your character, you create a profile and throw her in. While she is unique in some places, she is a cliche and others. While I am not justified enough to call her a Mary-Sue as of yet, there are some concerns.

If you work on some bits, you're good.
Taeniaea chapter 7 . 8/7/2010
cool story
kittygirl365 chapter 7 . 7/28/2010
Is there going to be a sequel? this was a great story!
pokemonjkl chapter 7 . 7/28/2010
what happen next? update soon.
Michelle Winchester chapter 3 . 7/27/2010
it is not lame i like it