Reviews for Happy Birthday Halie, Love!
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 14 . 8/16/2014
I'm sorry, but I think of them using a video camera to shoot a movie is a bit too... Muggle.
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 13 . 8/16/2014
Another lovely chapter.
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 12 . 8/16/2014
Such a loving family. You write them really well.
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 11 . 8/16/2014
"I think Teddy is the hottest."- that was my favourite line!
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 10 . 8/16/2014
I love the way you write Teddy, as being so kind to James, Albus and Lily.
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 9 . 8/16/2014
I laughed out loud while reading the last line. Good job!
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 8 . 8/16/2014
An interesting piece.
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 7 . 8/16/2014
Aw! Sibling love!
2sidedstoryteller29995 chapter 6 . 8/16/2014
I loved the dialogue between the children in this chapter.
Guest chapter 5 . 6/24/2014
I really enjoy the dialogue between the children.
Guest chapter 4 . 6/24/2014
I can easily image this exact scenario happening. Well done!
Guest chapter 3 . 6/24/2014
Accidental magic always makes for a good chapter.
Guest chapter 2 . 6/24/2014
I love chapters where we get to see Harry being a great Dad, especially with Lily.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/24/2014
v. funny.
I.am.me. 2000 chapter 4 . 6/1/2012
couldn't stop smiling or laughing! it was great!

you really have a talent for making their dialogues seem real and hilarious!

keep writing!
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