Reviews for Not As Planned
brionyjae chapter 13 . 9/8/2010
*sigh* I never really thought about the city's aftermath before! :) Nice touch. OMG I shall find this version of the song... :D and an ACTUAL stripper Ianto story! *gasp* 100% interested ;)
Istezada chapter 13 . 9/8/2010
Okay. Yup, that one was a throat-clenchy one. I... did cheer Ianto for killing Gray though. Actually I cheered Jack first cos I was sleepy and misread. :) *snuggles them both*
toobeauty chapter 13 . 9/8/2010
Orion Lyonesse chapter 13 . 9/8/2010
So sad! Very poignant and well written. Got a lump in my throat and tears running down my face.

Keep writing!
obsydiandreams chapter 13 . 9/8/2010
gah! what did you do! i didn't see this coming from a mile off... damn, that blew my mind! ...holy shit, you just killed tosh and owen! i mean, i knew it was coming. obviously i knew it was coming... but... shit! i was crying from the first sentence of this, and bawling my damned eyes out by the end... could barely read the screen... wow.

how ianto is keeping it all together is beyond me... i guess, he has to be strong for jack. someone does. damn. just... damn. he's too wonderful.

i like how he handles jack in this one. just putting aside all of his insecurities and whatnot and holding him. hard to imagine jack needing support that badly. but this is why he needs ianto.

wow. i'm blown away by this chapter. ...just... blown away. damn girl, you are amazing.
A Slice above the others chapter 13 . 9/8/2010
Awww...that was absolutely adorable! I love how sweet it was! I'm really enjoying how this fic is going and really can't wait for the next chapter!
Somewhere's Sword chapter 13 . 9/8/2010
:( Poor Jack and Ianto! *hugs them both* at least they have each other :)

I miss you and other awesome peoples, and I need hugs. School sucks D:

Lucy xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
obsydiandreams chapter 12 . 9/8/2010
oh god! i think something about the absolutely casual way that jack tells him that he loves him is amazing! that was so cute... beautiful. "you can have jack, they can have the captain-y bits" i looove that line! :)

and it was so... in character. i can see them doing this. damn, i wish i could see it... heh, RTD needs to talk to you about coming episodes. :)
Somewhere's Sword chapter 12 . 9/8/2010
Awwwww :D Just what I needed to cheer me up after a crappy first day back at school, thank you dear! :)

What have you been up to lately, anything fun?

Lucy xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
captainme chapter 12 . 9/8/2010
I love their reasoning for why they love each other. I can understand the snoring one though. Has to be love to put up with that.

Fablous work! I love these little snippets. :)
lone-star-woman chapter 12 . 9/8/2010
Oh, this is lovely. I enjoyed all of Jack's fretting over finding the right moment, and when it does arrive, it's so wonderfully understated. I also love Ianto's reaction - so in character.
brionyjae chapter 12 . 9/8/2010
You have their characters PERFECT! :D can definitely imagine this. Love Jack's inattention on work etc etc :D *sighs* Such a lovely scenario, thanks so much! :D
Orion Lyonesse chapter 12 . 9/8/2010
Another sweet chapter. Love the details of their day, especially the sunset walk and supper.

Keep writing!
cjh4ever chapter 12 . 9/8/2010
Declaring love over the fish and chips, very charming. Lovely slice of their life yet again, thanks.
toobeauty chapter 12 . 9/7/2010
just beautiful, as usual! those last lines were perfect!
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