|Reviews for Does Not Follow|
| Ioga chapter 2 . 12/29/2010
Hey, don't sell yourself short. This is actually a fun idea! I was rather lost on the Sailor Moon parts (could maybe use more reader-hand-holding when introducing them, who knows), but the old fairy tales mixed in fit like a glove. I'm sure a few more could be fitted in along the way, too... (Maybe crossing this all over with, say, Stargåte? No wait, forget I said anything. X-))
There's some references here and there (like the something crawling out of a cave in mid-chap2) that I couldn't credibly connect to anything. A polish round might also catch whatever language strangenesses I completely forgot by now. This is a story worthy of some love!
| Bigreader in The Omniverse chapter 2 . 8/3/2010
funny, wish it had continued. 2 genmas, wonder what nodoka thinks of that manly situation.