Reviews for Clarity
Zoser chapter 1 . 7/31/2010
Love the mood of this piece. I know it says complete but more would be nice.
elleelle chapter 1 . 7/31/2010
interesting and different.
polrobin chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
Oh...brilliant!

"She's been so intent on the target that she'd almost missed this crucial component. But the colonel hadn't and he'd known that she had. He is neither reproachful, nor disappointed. It's not a mistake; it won't be unless she misses, but rather, another facet of how they work. One acting as an extension of the other."

In a piece that has so much beauty in its language, this paragraph stands out. Truly. I've posted the same comments to GateWorld where you were just rec'd.
Cort 85 chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
Nice :D
i.m. nell chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
Indeed, they are in sync! Thanks for the nice read!
dp chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
Very nice.
Majikthize chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
Oh wow that's just wonderful. You really have a great talent for descriptive writing. I was in the moment there.

Thank you for sharing that with the world.
steadfast chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
I thought this was great. I know a purist(like my husband)would snort over the portrayal of Jack and Sam as spotter and sniper, but he's not even a Stargate fan! Within this universe they can be anything you want, and you did a beautiful job with the two relationships. Thank you.
PatriciaS chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
Great tension and feeling through out the story. Thanks for sharing.
hedwiggins chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
Great little story on how amazingly well those two work together.
DNU1 chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
Nice. Once of my favorite writing styles. More please.