Very original

depressing but good. Nothing like the funerals I've been to, but who knows. This is bringing back memories but isn't that what a story is about? Something to relate to.

This is absuloty postively the most original creative Percy Jackson stories I have ever read. I have NEVER EVER read anything like this b4. I like it. This was well written and good grammer and such. Everyone thought that Percy Jackson would always die a hero or some noble death. Who knew he could die for something so pathetic. Good story...

Brilliant.

Honestly, I have no other words to say.

Well, actually, I do: "A few moments of uncomfortable silence passed before Travis spoke up, "So how has everyone been.""

Should there not be a question mark?

Besides that, I really, really enjoyed this. The way you wrote it astounded me. The beginning was virtualy flawless, as it brought us into the mood of the story, and you didn't go too long for a narration...

I liked how you finished it. I'm not going to say that I can't see this happening to Percy, because at the end, when Annabeth did her thing, you explained it in the way that made me believe it.

I loved it.

Irish

I still wonder why I haven’t reviewed any of your fics yet. Silly, silly Andy. :P

It was wonderful and poetic and you captured the emotion perfectly.

Good job, Bianca. I loved it.

- Audreacity

WOW!

This was quite a piece,in many ways. Keeping the reader slightly in the shadows as in to who's death it was was a nice techinque. Something Short of Tragedy is an excellent and well-fitted title to this story. Something all titles should be. The summary and the piece itself, overall are very thought provoking. The characters are in character,which is nice. Especially Annabeth. This was an interesting ending to Percy's life. It's not like a fairytale,which provides a more realistic environment for the reader. This oneshot displayed the changes that occured in Percy's life, Annabeth's guilt,and even Nico's jealousy. Overall,I did enjoy this.

I LOVED this. Absolutely loved it. Not only because it's the sort of sad ending stories my creepy-self likes, but rather because of its quality. Leaving us in the shadows about who the deceased was till the middle was rather brilliant,making sure that none of the characters cared for him anymore, since he died long before actually being stabbed. Genius.

Always a fan,

Hp

Awesomeness Bianca.

Yeah that's about it. :)

I have not been that close to tears in a REALLY long time. *hugs* I loved it. Everyone was in character and it was just... beautiful.

*claps*

I really liked this. Nice grammar, nice spelling.

Overall? 9/10.

Thanks, much.

~Rachel.