Reviews for Vibrant, Lifeless
ccngem chapter 1 . 6/16/2012
Wow, must have let my guard down a little bit, it's brought tears to my eyes!
PT21 chapter 1 . 8/18/2010
Oh wow! So sad!

But very very good :)
tasha rumgay chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
oh wow what a well written piece

truley moving well done
beyondwhat-u-see chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
Loved it, it gave me chills. Very well written. :)
catgrl chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
Very very sad..
Alesia G chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
Boy am I glad you don't do angst often, you are tooo good at it. And I can't believe you killed her! :) Seriously nice job, it is heartwrenching.
Sophies-Welt chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
STLFAN chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
Nicely done, but incredibly sad. You should have a tissue warning on this one.
KellyRoxton chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
He wakes from this morbid dream and pulls her warm body close and inhales the scent of their two bodies joining scent that is all theirs... wrapping her up in hugs and pushing the nightmare far from his thoughts...

Can't take that one that's my ending and I'm sticking too it.

Scarlett Thoughts chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
Wow, that was totally a bummer. So sad.

Very well written.

You have to quick write something happy!
Angel Sciuto chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
wow I really hope you're going to develop this one.

As much as its bad that Abbey is dead in this one, its an interesting angle to pursue
Abbigail Cross chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
Interesting. I'm tempted to ask for more, but I shall resist. :)

I wonder who killed her. Poor Gibbs.

very good imagery, too.

KouenTaisa chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
... okay, now I know why you felt bad.

I feel even worse for loving it.