Reviews for Father's pain
Emmrys chapter 1 . 3/12/2011
That was so freakin' adorable. I think I'm crying.
Hyperthia chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
Nice work on this! The emotions were great, and of course I loved the Parental Hughes/Havoc/Ed interactions.

Our lil Edo is all grown up :')
16Echos chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
SO beautifully written. I love how you captured the emotions perfectly, I enjoy reading stories that make the narrator's feeling's seem as my own. Great job!
Screaming Argonaut chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
d'aww! that was cute! you wrote that very well.