Reviews for The Perfect Guy
Guest chapter 1 . 8/20/2014
I love it!
MyLifeofWriting chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
Come on please continue I'm dieing to know wat happened next
Sohania chapter 1 . 4/16/2012
That was great! Please right more? Maybe like a journal entry from Hanna?
child-of-song chapter 1 . 8/6/2010
That was so cute! I loved it, I really hope they get together in the show.
Miss Ay Jay chapter 1 . 7/31/2010
Okay so since they're pretty much my Pretty Little Liars OTP, I was so, so excited to read this. And I absolutely LOVED it. Very well written; there was a nice flow to your story, and a lot of great emotion in your words. Basically, I'm definitely favoriting this, because if there's one story that could cheer me up when I'm down, it's this one.
TuxedoJunction chapter 1 . 7/31/2010
Good job! You really got Lucas' character down. A few suggestions for improvement:


"No your not," laughed Lucas, plopping down on the couch.

"You're" is the correct spelling.

-Take it a little slower on the end. Consider how momentous this moment is for Lucas; he's probably never gone out with anyone. Hanna would definitely kiss Lucas out of the blue, but he'd probably be more than a little shocked and nervous-he might even need reassuring

Other than that, great job. I enjoyed the dialog and how your characters stayed true to themselves.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
FINALLY we have some hanna/lucas!
xwarmembrace chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
Yes! Lucas&Hanna! Haha. Definitely my current PLL OTP.

I love all of the dorky stuff. I love how you made Hanna a closeted dork, and I loved what Lucas said about Sean, Ali, and Mona. It's all so true! This is so adorable. Ahhhh. (:
snowangel787745 chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
I LOVED IT! I so love Lucas and Hanna! Write more!
TheCuteVamp chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
cute story-I love Hanna and Lucas.
ana2222 chapter 1 . 7/27/2010
nice ! I love hanna/lucas ! keep it up :)