Reviews for Chasing Reality
Xsopocx chapter 1 . 9/18/2012
Update please!
NewSlove chapter 6 . 9/17/2012
love this story! and didn't expect to hear that it could be a dream which turned out it was... and hearing saito and now arthur was a projection just broke my heart! i loved them both lol. please don't tell me eames is also a projection. i don't think i can take it if he is! anyway, can't wait for more!
JuliaBrazilianGirl chapter 6 . 3/24/2012
it will take too long to post the next chapter? *-*
JuliaBrazilianGirl chapter 6 . 3/21/2012
Amazing *-*
Mariabonita chapter 6 . 2/23/2012
WOW! What a mindblowin way to make a comeback!. You've made the long wait soo worth it! Thanks for writing this... WOW!
Rosejoanna chapter 5 . 12/29/2010
Omg love it
GalanthaDreams chapter 5 . 12/4/2010
This is lovely, and I adore that you include mentions of literary works. In fact, I myself rather loved The Scarlet Letter.
Guest chapter 1 . 10/26/2010
Ack, this is such a well-written story, I hope you continue it! I'm loving the Robert/Ariadne, it's so cute and plausible, really. 3
Red Bess Rackham chapter 5 . 9/27/2010
WOW. I did NOT seeing that coming at all. What a delicious twist! My jaw dropped open after the first little bit of this chapter and I found myself reading frantically onward.

NICE job - I feel like the story has already improved a lot from the first chapter, with a bit more "meat" to it, if that makes any sense. At times it still feels a touch rushed, but it's much better.

Very cool! Please update - gotta know what happens next!

~Red
Red Bess Rackham chapter 4 . 9/27/2010
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Wow, they better be right!

This was definitely the best written chapter so far. I appreciate that Robert explained how easily he'd know everything in the first chapter, and Robert and Ariadne's connection felt much more real in this chapter. Good job!

~Red
Red Bess Rackham chapter 3 . 9/27/2010
Ouch, rookie mistake letting someone touch your totem, Robert!

Overall I like this story, although it does feel quite rushed and abrupt. All of them are jumping to conclusions very quickly, and though they are right, it's still going pretty quick.

I also think there should be a lot more emotion in this story because though interesting plot wise, it feels flat and disconnected in terms of emotion - there's some hints here and there with how the characters say something (like "his tone was rife with warning" or "she trailed off, suppressing tears) which is good, but I definitely think the story needs a look into their thoughts more. Whether you decide to focus on just one of them, or all of them, I think a touch more detail and emotion would go a very long way.

I'm interested for more...!

~Red
Red Bess Rackham chapter 2 . 9/27/2010
I wonder why he's purposely dodging the question of why he had no totem during Cobb's job?

The plot thickens! :D Good job, I'm interested for more...

~Red
Red Bess Rackham chapter 1 . 9/27/2010
Hmm... I am very interested, but Ariadne sure gave the story of the job up awfully easily. Your summary really hooked me, though, so I must continue! :)

~Red
pink-promise chapter 1 . 9/24/2010
amazing! you have a thing with words 3 please take a look at mine too s/6334669/3/Between_Dreams_and_Hopes
NorthernLights25 chapter 5 . 9/24/2010
Please update soon!
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