|Reviews for Nine Months|
| Karitsa chapter 18 . 7/28/2012
OMG I Want A 2nd Part ... I Love It Really ...
| Karitsa chapter 9 . 7/28/2012
Noooooooooooo! Eiji Why You Didn't Make Him Cry And Beg For All You Past This Time All Alone?
| Karitsa chapter 8 . 7/28/2012
OOoohhhhh Some Times Eiji Can Be So Mad ... Muahahahahaha
| Karitsa chapter 7 . 7/28/2012
OMG What Can We Do With Out The Support Of A Mother?
| Karitsa chapter 6 . 7/28/2012
Im So Mad At Oishi If I Have Him In Front Of Me I Will Slap Him ...
| Karitsa chapter 5 . 7/28/2012
OMFG ... OMFG ... What's Oishi Thinking? Poor Eiji Now When He Needed More Than Ever ...
| Karitsa chapter 4 . 7/28/2012
I Will Kill Oishi How Dare He Do Something Like That To Eiji ...
| Karitsa chapter 3 . 7/28/2012
OMG ... OMG ... OMG ... Eiji Is Pregnant Woooohooooo !
| Karitsa chapter 2 . 7/28/2012
Poor Eiji ...
| Karitsa chapter 1 . 7/28/2012
Waaaaaahhhhh Momo And Echizen Have A Baby It Is So Exited ... This Is A Comment Why You Didn't Described Momo And Echizen's Baby I Wonder Who He Looks Like ... About Tezuka And Fuji Well I Hope The Baby Looks More Like Tezuka But With The Personality Of Fuji ... Let See What Will Happened With Eiji And Oishi And Kaidoh And Inui ...
| sweetiebee57835 chapter 1 . 5/4/2012
I love this fanfiction! I've read it at least three times, and it's still so amazing. The golden pair os just so cute, and the way you write is amazing. Please make more like this.
| adi-nicky chapter 18 . 7/3/2011
i'm glad that everyting turned out well for Eiji and Oishi and a lovely story
thank you very much
| WinterValentine chapter 18 . 5/18/2011
This is so cute. I truly like this fic .
| Miss-Leth chapter 11 . 2/24/2011
I'm currently in the process of reading through your story but had to stop and comment when I saw your authors note. It's nice to meet a fellow nocturnal human! You don't see them very often! You've gotta admit, some of the best ideas come at the oddest hours!
| Speadee chapter 18 . 1/20/2011
It is like Oishi to worry and find out what happened, especially for serious things. When you said "knew exactly when," what day was it? I was afraid that Yunokawa was scheming and planning to hurt Kikumaru and the baby. That's why I thought that Kikumaru should have brought Oishi and maybe Fuji along with him. Yunokawa is really not qualified to be a doctor.
Though I did feel kind of bad for Yunokawa not having friends, I didn't think he could ever be friends with the Golden Pair or their friends. Maybe the reason he never had friends was because he wasn't nice to them either. For example, he made fun of that guy when his girlfriend called. To tell the truth, what Yunokawa said didn't quite make sense. He did have other friends during the internship, and they joined him in making fun of that guy and trying to break up the Golden Pair. Besides, if he wanted to stay friends with Oishi, he didn't have to let go. They could still remain friends and keep in touch. Technology has made keeping in touch easier. I guess there's a lot of things Yunokawa didn't mention. For example, he probably had a crush on Oishi instead of just seeing him as a friend.
In Chapter 2, Oishi mentioned that the hospital was 7 hours away. Did Yunokawa travel all the way just to apologize, or did he originally live in Tokyo or nearby, and went there only for the internship?
The stress wouldn't be the only thing that caused Kikumaru to collapse. It was mostly the pain, which wouldn't have been so severe at that time, as I mentioned. The labor and pain would have been brought on by stress, but the messages weren't the only source of stress. As you said, there were also the financial problems and fighting over names. However, it served Yunokawa right when Kikumaru blamed it all on him.
As I mentioned, Yunokawa and his friends wouldn't have caused the Golden Pair to miss so much of the pregnancy and baby's life. Oishi wouldn't have easily believed them, at least without talking to Kikumaru first, and the stress, pain, and hitting the head wouldn't have caused a month-long coma. People in real life have fainted while stressed and hit their head hard enough to cause bleeding, and that still didn't put them in a coma. They woke up a few hours later. Besides, having Kikumaru miss the whole first month of his daughter was too much, especially after Yunokawa's harassment and Oishi not being there for the first 3-4 months. I think just a few days would have been enough.
How were the Golden Pair able to buy a house when they didn't even have enough money to buy everything for their baby?
Did Oishi ever finish medical school?
If Captain Tezuka and Fuji are calling each other by their 1st names, why aren't the Golden Pair doing the same? Kikumaru should have been calling his partner "Syuichirou."
I like how you had the original traditionl pairings in the story. The "Mommy Picture" was a good idea though I can't imaging Inui or Kaidou with mpreg or as parents. With the way those two are, they're better off adopting or not having children as well.
Actually, using a camera shouldn't be hard, so there would be nothing strange about Captain Tezuka or others knowing how to take pictures. Still, I like the idea of Fuji teaching Captain Tezuka.
Overall, it's a good story. You did well on suspense, always making me nervous. As I mentioned, tt would be better if things weren't so abrupt and rushed, and you also had Oishi's side of the story. Doing research on things, such as medical school procedures and schedules and health issues would have been a good idea, too. Making medical school sound like only 4 years of college with much flexibility in schedules is an insult to medical students and doctors.
You should also go back and reread what you wrote for consistency, especially on time lapse. For example, in one chapter, you said that Kikumaru would be 8 months pregnant in a week, but the following chapter you said he was 7 months along, when a week or almost a week had already passed.
OOC was another issue that came up. As I mentioned, it seems as if most of the characters didn't go to college, which is OOC for them. For example, Captain Teuzka and Fuji lived goether and had a child at 20, which would be when college was still taking place. It sounds like they didn't even go to college, which would be OOC, and this is an insult to them. Same with Kikumaru just attending community college part-time, especially since most Asian countries don't have community colleges. A story like this actually wouldn't even happen with the Golden Pair. They have to be OOC in a bad way as you had them, and that is an insult to them.
Earlier, I said that it would be nice if "Twins" had been part of this story. Now I think it could be a good sequel or epilogue for it, with just a few minor revisions.