Reviews for Mountains
Guest chapter 36 . 11/18/2012
awww love it! :D
JustQuinn chapter 3 . 9/28/2012
I truly like your story and though english is not your mother tongue (not mine, either) it doesn't interfere with your storyline and you write very well! Thank you for sharing this with us/me.
Cheers!
J.Q.
hiddenhorcrux chapter 34 . 7/18/2012
This is one of my favourite King Arthur stories and I'm surprised that you've only received 26 reviews? Anyway just wanted to reaffirm you that your story is well loved and I can't wait to see how the story plays out.

I hope Aurora and Lancelot can sort out their differences and just go back to the way they were, because this awkwardness is painful! Glad to see they're taking steps to get there :)
Looking forward to your next chapter!
RebornRose1992 chapter 34 . 7/6/2012
gasp :o for a moment there i thought u were going to make guinevera with lancelot! XD thanks for updating
RebornRose1992 chapter 33 . 4/24/2012
i like! :) omg lol so lancelot likes guinever? XD gasp
RebornRose1992 chapter 32 . 4/23/2012
please update! :) i love this story! i cried when lancelot died :(( but this story almost makes up for it!
Kate Rosewell chapter 4 . 2/4/2012
Your fic has a good story line and I'm enjoying watching the romance unfold! :) I like that the misunderstandings and prejudices between Aurora and Lancelot are slowly being eroded away!

The grammar and spelling errors get a bit distracting, like the fact that 'Roman' should be capitalised. Something a beta would easily help fix!

Also, just a historical point. Cleo signs her letter in French, but even Old French didn't exist in the 5th century. Most of the population of Normandy would be different Germanic tribes. Gaul, including the Normandy area, would have a mixture of languages, including Latin from the Romanisation and Old Frankish, since a large area was ruled by the Franks.

That said, I feel the story has great potential and I look forward to finishing it!

Kate
xxmadmooxx1995xx chapter 29 . 9/8/2011
God I love this story, I'm so glad you kept Lancelot alive and I am desperate for them to get back together. Please update again soon!
xXxFantasyAmorexXx chapter 28 . 8/27/2011
This is a really good story, i fell in love with it. Plz update soon!
KimiBrazil chapter 28 . 7/16/2011
I love it so far! i cant wait for the next update!
Cordapia chapter 28 . 7/16/2011
I love your story. I like the plot and I love the fact that Lancelot gets a woman cause you know.. He's so.. He deserves happiness. I just finished your story and I'm wondering why you don't get as much reviews as you should. Nonetheless, I think your story is great, it's fine, with a few spelling and grammar mistakes, it should be perfect. Marysue is when your femal main character is very exaggerated. For example, a woman for Lancelot wOuld be like she's kindhearted, she's funny, she knows how to fight, she beats mostknights in fighting and she can speak different languages, and she's a princess with powers needed to save the war. That is an example of a Mary sue, or something like that. I'm pretty sure you already know, my review is a little late. Anyways, that is all I can say. I love your story and I wish you wouldn't kill Lancelot. Or any of the knights, especially Lancelot. Don't stop writing because of the lack of reviews. I think your doing a good job keeping it up. Keep it up. Update soon, kay?
hiddenhorcrux chapter 27 . 6/8/2011
Please update! This is one of my most favourite king arthur stories ever and I'm still dying to see how it all plays out :)
Fierce Lady chapter 27 . 3/23/2011
You keep asking for reviews and I am surprised if you're not getting many. I am really enjoying your story. And I have to say that I am very impressed by how well you do even though english isn't your first language. Have you thought about getting a beta for your story? I realise that it's kind of late in the story. But if you would be interested, I would be glad to offer my services to help with editing and whatnot. Reguardless, I would love to keep reading this and hope to see another post soon! Keep up the good work!
unknown chapter 27 . 3/22/2011
First off I would like to say that I'm really glad that you've updated. Secondly I would like to say that I;m glad everything seems to be coming together again. I'm really looking forward to the next chapter and how you're going to bring Aurora and Lancelot back together again.

I was hesitant and first to review not because I think the story is bad or anything, just that I personally don't like reviewing. But I thought I better since it's obvious you took your time to do this and did such a good job.
Anime Princess chapter 25 . 1/14/2011
Mary-Sue is an OC character who fills in the sterotypical role of a match for a knight. Unfortunately they don't really do anything, per se, they were just there to move the story.

That's my view of a Mary-Sue.
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