Reviews for Pocket Watch
Guest chapter 1 . 7/19/2014
Make a second chapter!
fullmetalpassion chapter 1 . 11/27/2013
Awww...this was sweet. I loved it!
Bmw chapter 1 . 10/22/2013
Really good please make it a sequel
Me chapter 1 . 1/5/2012
Cute! Despite a few grammar errors, this was really good. I really loved Al and Mei's gift for Ed and the last couple of lines of the chapter: "If you didn't want a party, you should have said something sooner." "I did..." XD

Speaking of the party, I hope you write a chapter for it. I'd love to read it!

Keep up the good work!
WitchWarren chapter 1 . 11/26/2011
I'll just start with this:SQUEEEEEEEEEEEE

Royai is my OTP but throughout the series I was a really big fan of EdWin, and I absolutely LOVE this chapter.

It's just the right amount of happy and joking and lovey-dovey and it really flows like a real party or get-together of friends would and it's not too outrageous or even remotely OOC.

So I kinda-wanna-hafta-beg ya to put in a sequel 'cause this is GOOD.
Potter Fan838453 chapter 1 . 10/10/2011
Oh that was so sweet I love drabbles. Thanks for sharing
kalicious chapter 1 . 7/19/2011
How cute was this? Very cute! Fabulous job.
Noodleisasterous chapter 1 . 3/1/2011
thank you it was good
Hellocloser chapter 1 . 2/13/2011
Sequel! Hahah , very cute EdWin fluff.
KinariXP chapter 1 . 1/17/2011
Just really amazing. XD I feel so bad that this didn't have a second chapter LOL. XD I wanted ot see what's next! :D Inetersting storyline! Great job! ;D BTW, my type of story. ;)
Reminescence3701 chapter 1 . 10/12/2010
Do a second chapter pretty pleeease! :D This was great, and I loved reading it. Keep up the good work!
cookiethewriter chapter 1 . 8/27/2010
Aw, I thought that was cute.

:D I think a look at the party would be awesome, though it's all up to you. xD

Ledauphin chapter 1 . 8/11/2010
I enjoyed the dialogue. very nice
kataangkissed chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
Awh so cute! I love the idea for her giving him a watch. 3
Silverwolf819 chapter 1 . 8/1/2010
I like the this story is.
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