|Reviews for The Cactus Incident|
| ImagineBreaker7 chapter 1 . 11/1/2012
Nice work on this chapter
| erwin chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
awesome but something is wrong with the second chapter
| daniel 29 chapter 1 . 11/14/2010
Not 2 many sex scenes in stories can sound corny like the sex scenes in this story
| Siblings-Curse chapter 1 . 11/8/2010
Can't look at those two the same way ever again... I need a cold bath.
| pyrocatboy chapter 1 . 10/14/2010
-slurs drunkenly- I swear to drunk I'm not- Ooh shiny.
| AVP5 chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
Very very nice, good job.
| kill them all chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
(takes hit off pipe) I LOVE YOUR SHIT KEEP IT UP (falls asleep)