|Reviews for Crawl from the Chasm|
| AgentKalGibbs chapter 1 . 5/24
Such angsty but love the hopeful ending :)
| Soleya chapter 1 . 5/21/2017
Aww, the hug was perfect. Even your angst is kind of fluffy. Or maybe my angst is too angsty...
| Tamolino chapter 1 . 4/8/2015
Oh wow, I really loved this one
| minionsallonsy chapter 1 . 3/15/2015
So elegantly done! I absolutely loved it
| narellew68 chapter 1 . 2/21/2015
Amazing ... wonderful ... beautiful ... touching!
You did them proud, so thanks!
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/24/2014
I know you haven't posted in a long time, AkamaiMom, but seriously, this story is one of the BEST S/J fics I've read. Anytime you want to write a sequel where Jack doesn't let Sam drive off... I've read this story several times and each time I notice something new. This time it was how the dew drops are almost a separate character, silently mirroring the feelings of Sam and Jack. You are such a talented writer! I will be thrilled if you post anything new.
| DDSG-1Fan chapter 1 . 4/6/2013
Every time I read this story, I want to tell you how much I love it! Angst and ship perfectly executed. I can see the wet grass, hear the jogger and her dog, see the moonlight glinting... You are so talented with your writing and you capture Sam and Jack perfectly. I always wanted a sequel to this one. Do you think you could write a sequel sometime soon? :-)
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
Must have sequel! AkamaiMom, you rule with this story! The characters are spot on. The dialogue is perfect. The imagery brings the reader right in to the setting. I can hear the jogger jingling and feel the wetness from the dewdrops. Can't you have a sequel (or a second chapter?) wherein Sam doesn't drive off but instead turns around and goes back to Jack? Or where Jack doesn't let her drive off after all? I just love your stories and this one is so well written. Thanks for writing!
| sci-figirly chapter 1 . 6/5/2012
Whoa... I agree with everything DeltaLutra said. Definitely had to remember to breathe a couple times. Fantastic!
| DeltaLutra chapter 1 . 4/21/2012
This absolutely took my breath away. The tension was incredibly tangible the whole way through. You used some very clever dialogue, that really rang true to the characters, and the whole thing was just a delight to read :)
| majorsal chapter 1 . 6/9/2011
oh... so, so beautiful and poetic!
bring them together!
thank you and well done! ;)
| SaraBahama chapter 1 . 5/28/2011
That. was. awesome!
Thanks Aka! Oh the overwhelming angstyness! Twisted my heart...but the resolution was sweet. Carry on.
| Zeki Young chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
There are a lot of post-Abyss pieces out there. This is probably hands-down the most honest to the characters I've come across so far. While I've enjoyed other fics that have had them find more physical comfort with one another, your portrayal of possible events to my mind feels real. The dialogue is right on, and as always with these two, so much is said in a hug.
Thanks for sharing this wonderful piece of writing!
| taichi9 chapter 1 . 9/3/2010
I love this story, it's so perfectly them. I'm sitting in my office getting teary eyed. I can actually picture them on his front step awkward in only the Jack/Sam way that they can be. Just deliciously angsty and perfect. Please write more!
| DDSG1Fan chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
Really enjoyed your story! Well-written and great characterizations.