|Reviews for Forbidden|
| Victoria chapter 4 . 4/13/2012
this is great! you should continue! i cant wait to see more!
| Mi3staR chapter 4 . 10/18/2010
Beep, beep... The school bell is a fucken beep! What happen to the USA version! The brriiiiinnngg Sound D:
Okay my ranting is done moving along, awesome story honestly, specially the first two chapter finely detail, and full of emotions :3 and lust moments who wouldn't like that, totally. But seriously I think rin has a more perv mind then len, shouldn't it be len to have all the perv moments xD, anyways though I am a bit confused how the story is turning out, one bit len just say rin naked 'damn that must be sexy you lucky guy drools*' yes i'm a girl.
Then the next chapter *which took almost like forever to load because my mobile internet is so slow * which had rin waking up and making breakfast, and was about to fall on len.
Honestly I through that len was about to rape rin ._. Sinful but damn right! After all they both want it, so it may not be rape xD be happy now.
| Mudkip99 chapter 3 . 10/3/2010
O! Omg! I luv this so far! D I can't waint until u update! 0
| Rosario chapter 3 . 9/29/2010
please finish this! you are good at writing stories!
| RinLen chapter 3 . 9/14/2010
I love it! I hope you can update soon.
Rin and Len are my favorite characters from Vocaloid.
| Unending Enigma chapter 2 . 8/10/2010
thumbs up :)
| Nephelae chapter 2 . 7/31/2010
Such beautiful wording- truly lovely. Short and bittersweet.