|Reviews for The Flow of Things|
| SlashAddx chapter 2 . 8/31/2010
just beautiful. this is really tragic and great. i like the stream of consciousness style even tho we end up knowing more than he does.
| Melle22 chapter 1 . 8/17/2010
Poor Sunshine was so overwhelmed with his own emotions he wasnt able to objectively view Brian's. Definately a very sad moment in the show, where both of them are desperate for the other to just KNOW what they need, want and feel. A total recipe for disaster.
| LoveIsForever12528 chapter 1 . 8/17/2010
This was amazing you have such a talent for writing please write more fanfiction should not be deprived of your wonderful gift
| boriqua522 chapter 2 . 8/16/2010
that was great. definately different from how the original went, but i liked this scenario better. hope there is a 3rd chapter to this story.
| boriqua522 chapter 1 . 8/16/2010
wow, these are great. i love your style of writing, you say so much with just a few words, it truly is beautiful. love the way you let us into justin's thoughts on that horrible night. love it. hope to read more.
| SisiDraig - 2 chapter 1 . 8/2/2010
That was beautiful and poetic and very truthful. I loved the metaphore with the 'faulty faucet' (I think that's a 'tap' in British English, isn't it?) And I loved the way you entered Justin's head and Brian's to a certain degree. That scene at the end when Brian let's Justin get back into the bed is so sad and you've managed to capture all the emotions of it perfectly.
| Bigdogz09 chapter 1 . 8/1/2010
Angsty good stuff.
| nothing-rhymes-with-ianto chapter 1 . 7/28/2010
Oh my god I love this. This is so perfectly what I saw when I watched the last episodes of season 2. You captured it amazingly and I adore it. Thank you so much for writing this!