Reviews for Best Friends Fighting
desiblevins101 chapter 1 . 6/5/2014
Loved it! :D
twilight-twilight-twilight00 chapter 1 . 3/27/2013
I really like this!
shawna chapter 1 . 12/8/2012
Great story. I really liked how you had Alice and Bella make up after the fight and that you had Alice give Bella the neckless back. Great ending!
Lena chapter 1 . 4/4/2012
this story was funny as hell nigga you did good

(sorry if you don't like nigga i do not mean it in a negative way believe me)
Live-Laugh-Love-Till-The-End chapter 1 . 12/11/2011
DAMNNNNN the words being thrown around e.e I was like... " holy shet o.o"

LAWL I liked it! I really liked it! Ahhh Emmet would sing we are family o.e

Good job
LikeYouBelieveInMe100 chapter 1 . 9/12/2011
Ok. This was so childish it was rediculous lol. Its ok. I liked it.
AnnabethnAliceLuvr chapter 1 . 8/4/2011
Sometimes I love Alice but really, I can see her doing something like that. Well...I dunno, but I hate it when people do that, like just take control and so...self-centered. Gah I hate that. Like, not even consider other people

But I loved the story! :DDD... :D And Alice really is pretty nice I guess...if you see it from her perspective.

anyways, good job!
Fleur24 chapter 1 . 8/1/2011
Bella has a good reason to be mad at Alice. I can't believe, well i sort of can believe Alice would act that way about an old necklace.

""He turned to give me a pained look. I turned to Mike, who had a smug grin on his face, balled my fist up, and punched him square in the nose, most likely breaking it.

He screamed like a little girl, and held his nose, which had started bleeding.

"Edward's the only one who can touch me like that. I suggest you keep your dirty paws off of me before it's much worse next time," I said.

I went to add a kick to his balls, and that's when the teacher walked in. He saw me standing over a bleeding Mike, who was now cupping his sore balls."" YAY Bella's has a backbone!

Mike has been suspended!

""6 Hours Later

My head was on Edward's chest while he was playing with my hair. My stomach rumbled and I giggled.

"Stupid human needs," Edward muttered.

I laughed. "You know, you could always change me, then I would never have to worry about another human need ever again," I said.

"Ha ha, nice try. I told you, not until after we're married," he said."" That's just awesome!

WOW Bella and Alice really went at it!

I have never 'seen' Alice and Bella like this before.

Carlisle's pissed!

""No 'but's. And you wipe that pout off your face right now, Isabella," Carlisle said.

"Ha ha," Alice mocked me. I turned and glared at her.

"Do you want me to take away sex from you two, too? You both can sit in your rooms all night without Jasper or Edward in there," Carlisle threatened."" Yep Carlisle's extremely pissed.

OMG Alice! That was really low of her reminding Bella about the time she was a zombie.

""She moved back some, and I sighed, opening the box. I looked inside the small card board box and gasped. There, between the wrapping paper, was my grandmother Swan's necklace. I knew it was hers because it had her initials on the back.

"I'll just go now. You don't have to forgive me, I just thought that you would like that back. It was very hard to get it back. The guy I gave it to had sold it. When I found the guy he sold it to, I had to pay a lot to get it back. He was very fond of it, but I bargained with him," she said.

I looked up at her with tears in my eyes. She spent a whole lot of money on me, just so she could get the necklace back? Now I felt guilty for all the things I called her.

I ran and wrapped my arms around her neck. She smiled and wrapped her arms around me."" YAY Their friends again!

""Yayfulness! No more fighting!" Emmett said in a girly voice. We laughed at him. Then, out of nowhere, he started singing, We Are Family.

We all rolled our eyes at him. Looked at each other, nodding.

At the same time, we all screamed, "EMMETT, SHUT UP!"

He stop immediately and pouted. "You guys are mean," " What a great way to end the story.
ProlifeJesusFreakWriterGal chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
Good story!:)
ProlifeJesusFreakWriterGal chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
Good story!:)
SophieJaneLouise13 chapter 1 . 2/20/2011
This is really amazing! I love it! I never thought there could be that side to Alice and Bella, and you made it perfect!

I really enjoyed this:)

Sophie xxx
cookie.luvr999 chapter 1 . 1/13/2011
aww! this story was really OOC cause i don't think alice and bella would've said those things, but i still loved it. the end was great, i loved the part where emmett said "yayfulness" lol
Rainandsleep chapter 1 . 12/25/2010
OMG I LOVE THIS! your an amazing writer!

I love the way Alice and Bella are diferent from the books alot A LOT less innocent!

TThis is abit like a story wrote a while ago, but it's almost completley different the only thing the same is that Alice gives the object to a shop who sells it and Bella and Alice fighting each other.

I LOVE THIS AND MORE!

lo :P
edwards-girl-4-ever chapter 1 . 11/27/2010
so cute and funny
jeangary28 chapter 1 . 10/1/2010
loved the story glad that both Alice and Bella could make up in the end
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