Reviews for Stranded Outtakes
RobsVampyrGirl chapter 1 . 2/23/2013
really hot :D
BehindEverySmile chapter 1 . 4/22/2012
Hot as fuck. Hope you come up with another one :)
fuckbaby chapter 1 . 1/24/2012
wow. you should add more chapters to this!

this was absolutely amazing and hot.

you made me wet.


Edward asking Bella about what she was doing earlier in the water? I almost died laughing.

please post a next chapter with Bella answering it, honestly.

that would have been funny! and embarrassing for Bella, somehow.

thanks! you're awesome.
nikitabella chapter 1 . 12/28/2011
:D :D :D more fun times eh! well, if you like...:D
RandyWriter chapter 1 . 7/30/2011
Cute outtake...can't wait to see more. Love the story and would really enjoy more of it when you get a chance. Want to know what the world has in store for Edward and Bella.
boomerand chapter 1 . 12/16/2010
Yeah - that was fun, but your story is doing quite well without it!
ServantsofTwilight669 chapter 1 . 12/16/2010
RosesFromDrew chapter 1 . 12/6/2010
"You know, Bella, rape is very frowned upon," a sexy voice said across from me. I looked up at his face, surprised. His eyes were still closed, but he was grinning slightly.

"There's one more thing," he said. I looked up at him sleepily. He grinned wickedly. "Would you mind telling me what you were really doing in the water earlier?"

Lol, I love Edward. He's funny. I loved this outtake! :D
Edward's Baby Bella chapter 1 . 9/21/2010
hehe that was hott
Mgg1606 chapter 1 . 9/7/2010

Island nooky!

Very hot, Im excited that you posted, finally!

Please feel free to grace us with another outtake if you dont mind!


twifam1 chapter 1 . 9/6/2010
Loved the outtake! Hot! Loving the story as well and I am so glad she is pregnant!
imlovinfanfic chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
loved it! thanks
tkeaton1 chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
that was quite a yummy little treat there! :)
sballLuvr5 chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
hahaha that was really good. i'm glad you added it as an outtake :):)

AmericanGirl1990 chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
Oh Gosh! I love it! Especially the end ;p
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