Reviews for Duet
Carameldynr chapter 4 . 4/12/2015
I really like how this story is told from supporting characters' points of view. It gives a new refreshing looks to the story. You definitely have to continue this story. I'll be waiting!
JackFrost14 chapter 4 . 11/1/2011
love it! :)
ChaosRune chapter 4 . 9/4/2011
Please tell me you have plans to update this in the future, its one of the best Persona fics I have seen, I really love it, so I would really like to see a new update soon
AnimaniacXOX chapter 4 . 2/27/2011
Please update! This is so interesting!
blue19 chapter 4 . 1/29/2011
please update soon. that was awesome especially how minato is so protective and understanding of hinako.
jimbo jimmy chapter 4 . 11/25/2010
MOAR PLEASE it's been a long time, please update and make more
XoreandoX chapter 4 . 10/6/2010
Liking the story so far, though I'm curious to see what the pairing for Minato might be though.
Datenshi Aoi chapter 3 . 10/6/2010
Went and re-read the rest of the available chapters, some small grammatical errors here and there, nothing serious, but one thing in particular caught my attention: "His haunches are up, and he's walking stiffly as shouts and yells from the girls follow him."

I'm not sure how a guy can get his haunches (hip/buttock/upper thigh)up, and I'm sure it would be quite a sight, but possibly you meant "his shoulders were hunched up"?
Datenshi Aoi chapter 2 . 10/5/2010
Love the fic, and what appears to be the merging of the two storylines. I haven't played through the female Main's story yet, but from what I've heard, it seems you're keeping them both very much in character.

Three comments:

I don't think the pun of "Mi-niichan" and "My Niichan" works, in that Japanese pronounce "Mi" as "Me." Not that this detracts from your story in anyway, just an observation.

Next, I'm willing to concede that the Kirijo group might be very generous to its Persona users when furnishing their dorm rooms, but a computer is probably going too far, as they can become a very personal item.

Lastly, while I relate with Hinako's gaming tendencies, carrying three console systems and their collections is very much a space consumer, and unless Hinako's willing to constrain herself to ~3 sets of clothing, it's a bit too much for her to carry, particularly if you're travelling on foot/train. Perhaps a slight rewording so that Hinako is having the items shipped over, instead of bringing by herself.

Looking forward to more of this story!
complexities chapter 4 . 10/5/2010
This has got to be one of the best Persona fics I'm following so far. Most people follow the manga plot exactly and just rush into the first night's battle - I like how you're taking the time to characterize everyone and their respective relationships. Please keep writing and update again soon!
Droplet of Sour chapter 4 . 10/5/2010
Now THIS is what I'm talking about. As far as solid 'Sona 3 novellizations go, YER DOIN IT RITE. I especially like the fact that you actually have Minato and Hinako with different personalities. And it's not just a few words, it actually SHOWS in their actions. Minato is far more aloof about things than his sister, whom is kinda a ditz, but that's her charm.

Bright smiles upon thee as you go on your Journey, my friend!
Patcheresu chapter 4 . 10/4/2010
Amazing work thar.
XxXTwilight-SinXxX chapter 4 . 10/4/2010
I'm really glad you updated! I can already tell this will be a really good fic. You don't follow the script too closely so it isn't boring, but you stay true to the game. I also love your MC's! I really hope to see more!
Patcheresu chapter 2 . 8/20/2010
I enjoyed the humor and plot development in this chapter. You made FeMC live out more to her true personality and also showed a little of how Minato puts up with her.
cartoon moomba chapter 2 . 8/20/2010
Ooh, this is well written AND interesting! I love the little cameos of the Velvet Room - they're quite charming. Especially the one in the beginning with the blue butterfly. And Hinako and Minato are so different from each other - "Is he cute?" That made me giggle. :) I wonder what Ikutsuki meant by that comment...

Anyway, I like this! Update soon~!
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