|Reviews for Young|
| Sunpops chapter 11 . 6/19/2014
please write more!
| Guest chapter 6 . 6/19/2014
Really Good Story
| Guest chapter 1 . 5/14/2014
| glykeria chapter 11 . 12/10/2013
please update soon!
| DeceptionsMistriss chapter 11 . 9/4/2013
Please update this? This is the best narutoxpein fanfic out there, and I would love more of it.
| Guest chapter 11 . 7/2/2013
I'm loving this! Smexy, scary, thrilling, cute, and funny! That's the best kind of story! And Naruto's in it too so that an epic plus right there! Oops, sorry love, I think I've said too much! But it's just really awesome and keep up the good work. Arigatou author-San
| lito.dellamas chapter 11 . 4/17/2013
Oh, i love pein x naruto. it was awesome, i love how they treated each other. sasuke is so bad ass in this fic. but i likEd it. more pein x i love akatsuki! _
| Wolfisis chapter 11 . 4/15/2013
I hope you are going to update soon...I just found this and am so in love with it.I think you should have a major kick Sasukes ass moment in your story, I want to see Naruto kick his butt so bad.
| Kittens Kat chapter 11 . 4/8/2013
MAYBE THE ISLAND IS SO BIG IT HAS A MINI ISLAND INSIDE THAT I SURROUNDED BY KILLER ANIMALS OR A RAVINE OR AN EXTINCT VOLCANO CRATER THAT IS SO DEEP AND WIDE THAT IT IS IMPOSSIBLE TO SCALE AND HIS PARENTS ARE TRAPPED THERE AND ARE UNABLE TO LEAVE THE CRATER BUT IT HAS IT'S OWN ECHO SYSTEM SO THEY HAVE FOOD AND THEIR SHELTER CAN BE THE PLANE AS MAYBE IT ONLY TORE THE WINGS OFF. I HOPE THIS HELPS. THANK YOU FOR THE WONDERFUL STORY!
| Raven Halley chapter 11 . 3/19/2013
Ya! I finally found this story!
| wew faint chapter 11 . 3/16/2013
Yay im so glad that pein x naru is exist in dis chapter... Good luck. And i love it
| anonimous chapter 16 . 3/14/2013
Not to ne rude or anything, but if you didn't put up so many authors notes you'd probably be done by now.
| ConsumedHatred chapter 16 . 3/14/2013
I must say, this story is really wonderful. the way you pull Naruto's emotion into the light and explain them so detailed is awesome. I've never read any Pein x Naruto before, so this is my first, and I must say I love it XD And once again Sasuke is the bad guy :p I'm not a Sasukehater, but I don't mind if he is turned into the villain, since he fits the role so well XDXD
This is very well written, and I love how it is coming around. Please do keep on writing this story, because you are bringing me happy fangirl moments all the time XD
| Guest chapter 16 . 3/14/2013
Don't put it up for adoption I love this story
| yaoi1827 chapter 15 . 3/2/2013
does sasuke follow them?