|Reviews for Young|
| glykeria chapter 11 . 12/10/2013
please update soon!
| DeceptionsMistriss chapter 11 . 9/4/2013
Please update this? This is the best narutoxpein fanfic out there, and I would love more of it.
| Guest chapter 11 . 7/2/2013
I'm loving this! Smexy, scary, thrilling, cute, and funny! That's the best kind of story! And Naruto's in it too so that an epic plus right there! Oops, sorry love, I think I've said too much! But it's just really awesome and keep up the good work. Arigatou author-San
| lito.dellamas chapter 11 . 4/17/2013
Oh, i love pein x naruto. it was awesome, i love how they treated each other. sasuke is so bad ass in this fic. but i likEd it. more pein x i love akatsuki! _
| Wolfisis chapter 11 . 4/15/2013
I hope you are going to update soon...I just found this and am so in love with it.I think you should have a major kick Sasukes ass moment in your story, I want to see Naruto kick his butt so bad.
| Kittens Kat chapter 11 . 4/8/2013
MAYBE THE ISLAND IS SO BIG IT HAS A MINI ISLAND INSIDE THAT I SURROUNDED BY KILLER ANIMALS OR A RAVINE OR AN EXTINCT VOLCANO CRATER THAT IS SO DEEP AND WIDE THAT IT IS IMPOSSIBLE TO SCALE AND HIS PARENTS ARE TRAPPED THERE AND ARE UNABLE TO LEAVE THE CRATER BUT IT HAS IT'S OWN ECHO SYSTEM SO THEY HAVE FOOD AND THEIR SHELTER CAN BE THE PLANE AS MAYBE IT ONLY TORE THE WINGS OFF. I HOPE THIS HELPS. THANK YOU FOR THE WONDERFUL STORY!
| Raven Halley chapter 11 . 3/19/2013
Ya! I finally found this story!
| wew faint chapter 11 . 3/16/2013
Yay im so glad that pein x naru is exist in dis chapter... Good luck. And i love it
| anonimous chapter 16 . 3/14/2013
Not to ne rude or anything, but if you didn't put up so many authors notes you'd probably be done by now.
| ConsumedHatred chapter 16 . 3/14/2013
I must say, this story is really wonderful. the way you pull Naruto's emotion into the light and explain them so detailed is awesome. I've never read any Pein x Naruto before, so this is my first, and I must say I love it XD And once again Sasuke is the bad guy :p I'm not a Sasukehater, but I don't mind if he is turned into the villain, since he fits the role so well XDXD
This is very well written, and I love how it is coming around. Please do keep on writing this story, because you are bringing me happy fangirl moments all the time XD
| Guest chapter 16 . 3/14/2013
Don't put it up for adoption I love this story
| yaoi1827 chapter 15 . 3/2/2013
does sasuke follow them?
| baka36411 chapter 14 . 2/2/2013
I love this story so much! Thank you for not abandoning it (like so many authors do!) it can be funny when it needs to be, and emotional as well. It's well written but at times I get a bit confused as to where the characters are, like in the grocery store chapter. I couldn't really tell that they went back to naruto's (or if they even did) because it said that Kiba went to the stores bathroom...forgive me if I got that wrong though! (_)"
Please continue this story, it's really good and was amazing to read! :D
| AnimeCrazed121 chapter 14 . 2/2/2013
If your thinking of focusing on Pein and Narutos relationship development then you should put them into various situations where they are alone and Pein could possibly take advantage of the situation but he doesn't.
It would strengthen Narutos trust.
You said they were going to an island right? Well they could fall into a hole and be trapped in a cave for a couple days or something. Idk I'm not good at coming up with ideas.
| TigrezzTail chapter 14 . 2/2/2013
Heh, watching Sasuke attempt to track and/or follow them would be quite entertaining. I assume at some point they'd have to travel by boat over a considerable distance to find this island, and you can't use just any boat as it has to have room for supplies like food and fuel as well as the people. Not something you can just find right off the bat. I think a few hijinks and diversions deliberately set to waylay Sasuke in his attempts wouldn't be out of the running?