zenith chapter 3 . 1/27/2013
its so touchy... keep writing...
pointlessunusedaccount chapter 3 . 12/16/2010
Awwww, I LOVE THIS! you are suh a talented writer! and i love how for ONCE i can read something ( since most of us are girls on here) where Edward is the one to be all BLEHH im gunna admit mahh lurvee too yuh all sexxayyy and angerzzz LMAO! yuh know? cuz Bella is usually the one, since most of us ARE girls its just that we get embarressed for Bella and the rest of the characters, but escpecially for Bella because she IS the center of the "Twilight" francise and everything snd because we are girls and we know how it feels 3 Yur awesome and i love your work, please submit more chapters fast!... not to rush you or anything :3... , Big fan, Stormy 3 xxxxxx
Mrs.AliceBlack4ur411 chapter 3 . 8/17/2010
Omg i cant believe edward said that. But bella's kinda slow but i love it right more im so excited
CassieCat97 chapter 3 . 8/12/2010
Good chapter!
OCDE chapter 2 . 7/30/2010
Ok. Wow. Um. Just wow. No comment. Until next time.
Shadow.of.memory chapter 2 . 7/30/2010
Hahah lol LOVE chappie 2...heheh sums up being a five year old PERFECTLY! hahah *sigh* UPDATE IT ASAP! absolutely awesome :D
CassieCat97 chapter 2 . 7/30/2010
I liked this chapter! Can't wait till the 11th!
CassieCat97 chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
This looks good! Just a few questions... Are Bella and Edward just friends for now? How did they become friends?
alisonevexo chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
Upload now, not tomorrow :(

NOW! ;)
alisonevexo chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
Upload now, not tomorrow :(

NOW! ;)
taralynn09 chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
really cute. love it!
CandyCornXOXO chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
This is great and really funny!