|Reviews for Smoky Moonlight|
| Granten chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
I'm not really sure where this is going so I'd need to see one or two more chapters before mentioning tropes.
| Broken Kilter Express chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
A little short, but very atmospheric, so I must give it some praise. I would suggest going for at least twice the length you're working at, so that people can be drawn deeper into it.
OC's are a real challenge, but something tells me this one is really different. I shall be watching for the next chapter.