|Reviews for The Arcana Cabana|
| Guest chapter 9 . 12/1/2013
It's not you. The fandom has unfortunately fizzled out for the most part, but not completely! I'm still here. (And I hope you continue this- please?)
| Greenwood Archer chapter 9 . 10/24/2013
I really love this story! It's perfect! I love how you portrayed all of the characters, they were really acting as themselves (even Drake in a way). I read this fanfic three times already and the only flaw is that it's not finished. PLEASE, PLEASE update! I want to see how Balthazar's and Dave's relationship will evolve in the future.
Update or I'll raise Morgana to get you!
| Read a while ago chapter 9 . 6/15/2013
I'm so fucking disappointed you didn't finish this. This coulda been amazing
| maddie chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
Please update! This story is amazing.
| elise-hale913 chapter 9 . 11/2/2012
Your writing is amazing! People are just to lazy to review. Please update soon.
| blackrose2255 chapter 9 . 10/30/2012
please, please, please make the next one! it is so good! i really need to see their relationship evolve!
| Jai Rose chapter 9 . 8/16/2012
dangit. I started this story and now it hasn't been updated in such a long time and I REALLY REALLY want more! .
You should start again!
| xXxOtAkU-444xXx chapter 9 . 1/7/2012
I like it! **
| Moon6Shadow chapter 9 . 9/29/2011
*Blinks* Well for someone who struggled with science I actually understood that really well.
Well written and the characters are completely in character. The depth and life you give to the character by changing pros and giving reason to their madness really helps flesh out the characters personality and gives the reader a much deeper understanding as to why they are the way they are.
Also while you've classified this as OOC I could easily see the original characters acting in the same way if placed in the same situations. So in my opinion the only real OOCness is a slight shift in plot line.
Truthfulness, Balthazar's straight forward truthfulness throughout the entire story so far really endears him to me for some strange reason. I guess I’ve gotten used to the younger in the relationship being manipulated or kept in the dark by their protector for ‘the greater good’ however despite his determination to work for ‘the greater good’ his being upfront, truthful and companionate about it. Very different approach from what I normally read but a refreshing and appreciated change.
| fanastikal chapter 7 . 9/5/2011
'Balthazar paused at the noise, then gave an angry snarl and stomped his foot against the ground; immediately, the red flames extinguished and slowly rekindled into a blue fire.'
I love this image like you wouldn't believe, and it also makes me wonder if you've seen the hidden snarl Balthazar does in the movie after Dave tries to move the chair without his ring. After he told Dave 'You're making progress,' Dave proceeded to discredit that, ending with removing the pointed shoes and leaving the lab. Balthazar was surprisingly quiet during that whole spiel, and since Dave was the one talking, the attention gets focused on him. But right when he says 'I can't do it,' and turns away, Balthazar actually snarls; you can see and hear it if you're watching him and not Dave, who obviously doesn't see or hear it. If he had, I think he would've freaked!
Anyhow, this is one of my very favorite stories here, and I'm really sad that it's been over a year since you've added to it. I wish there was some magic word I could say that would make you continue it, but all I have is this . . . Please?
| dude chapter 9 . 7/17/2011
its the fandom after the first few weeks people stop looking at certain things or get caught in another fandom web like me i wanted to get on sa when it came out but i got sucked into a different one that i forgot the name of but i love the story so far
| brightsidetolife chapter 9 . 6/24/2011
Well that was interesting.
| Wolf Huntress chapter 9 . 6/22/2011
I love this story it is so awesome. this chapter was great.
| C'est Ma Belle Nuit chapter 9 . 6/20/2011
I just found this story today, and it's so freaking great! I hope to see how their relationship evolves...Please continue, I'm looking forward to your next update! :]
| RoxasIsReal13 chapter 9 . 6/15/2011
This is beyond brilliant and honestly the most original fic I've ever seen for this fandom, my only hope is that you continue it.