Reviews for Lares
Scarlet daydreamer chapter 9 . 4/7
I really liked this story so far. Why did you stop updating it? *wails* It's been five years! YEARS ! An it is so good, I really liked how everything isn't exactly the same as the movie.
I don't understand why Paris seems to hate Harry so much though. Is it the sword? The threats? The lack of fear of Riddick? Those seem to be too weak of a foundation to breed the kind of hatred you described.
Shazza and Fry's rivalry seems to be skirting the very edge of "justified dislike" and almost but not quite into "too much hatred without good reason" so I would recommend that you watch that in future chapters and make sure that there's something else done to escalate tensions before any true sniping at eachother begins.
Will you ever continue this? Pretty please with sugar on top?
neuer Anfang chapter 9 . 2/24
Are you ever going to finish this story?
Guest chapter 9 . 2/6
Would love some more of this. I hope there is space for writing in your life this yearl
reptoholic chapter 9 . 11/20/2016
NOOO!
reptoholic chapter 8 . 11/20/2016
Save them
reptoholic chapter 7 . 11/20/2016
i hope shazza lives
reptoholic chapter 6 . 11/20/2016
Keep up the good work.!
reptoholic chapter 5 . 11/20/2016
getting good.
reptoholic chapter 4 . 11/20/2016
I hope he takes control of the group.
reptoholic chapter 3 . 11/20/2016
Keep up the good work.
reptoholic chapter 2 . 11/20/2016
This looks interesting, I just hope he is strong.
reptoholic chapter 1 . 11/20/2016
Wow, this looks interesting
Dream Bound Nightmare chapter 9 . 11/18/2016
Are you fucking kidding me right now?!
Firefox chapter 9 . 7/31/2016
Are you going to update on it, because I really like the plot!
rell chapter 9 . 1/14/2016
abandon the real world and come back to us. the dark side has cookies!
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