Reviews for Trial and Error
RazenX chapter 10 . 8/11/2010
Good chapter. Very dramatic beginning and ending, the love triangle seems to be going well for you. Thanks again for putting syao in, you potrayed him well. Can't wait for more-X

P.S. I'd enjoy a sequel. Also do you want me to send you syao's full story?
Appealtoreason chapter 8 . 8/10/2010
Also, if you need a character to be tossed in at some point, UlforceVeedramon (mega) would be cool. Even Aeroveedramon (ultimate)
Appealtoreason chapter 6 . 8/10/2010
The dialog can be confusing trying to figure out who says what when

The story is really good though
etiger1995 chapter 5 . 8/10/2010
i really love the story so far but i would like to put in a small request i was wondering if you could possibly put trace and black Agumon in as help for Tai and the others for the final battle? To kinda explane how they met Will and Lightmon.
etiger1995 chapter 2 . 8/10/2010
i knew that there were other people who thought that Sora and Tai should be together
Neon765 chapter 9 . 8/10/2010
OOOooooooh! Sora... she your favourite character or something? because your putting her in a confusing situation. Matt, Tai and now she seems to be developing feelings for Will. :D Can't wait for you to update though. It is a GREAT story sooo far... _

Neon765
WolfSummoner93 chapter 10 . 8/10/2010
I would like a sequeal, the story is pretty good. and AWW! Will is starting to like Sora, now if he could only let her in -shake head-

lol, great chapter. can't wait for the next one
RazenX chapter 9 . 8/10/2010
Great chapters. So there's more to Will then meets the eye, and more enemies than just David. Very well writtent, can't wait for more-x
Elegon chapter 9 . 8/9/2010
I hope Will wakes up! And I can't wait to see who Sora chooses! And you aren't updating slowly, if you can go faster though, please do!
WolfSummoner93 chapter 9 . 8/9/2010
poor Will, having to face his biggest Nightmare it seems. ANd more trouble with the apperance of Adam; is he good or bad? (why do I continue to ask questions when no one will answer me? xD) lol, great chapter and can't wait for an update
WolfSummoner93 chapter 8 . 8/8/2010
poor Will, hope he's ok. What happened to Momo and Lianne? And do I smell some romance between Sora and Will cooking?

-shrug- maybe I'm imagining it. Great chapters, can't wait for an update.
Elegon chapter 7 . 8/7/2010
Whoa! Awesome chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next!
RazenX chapter 6 . 8/7/2010
Great chapter. You went from dramatic moments in the beginning to touching moments at the end. The scene with Tai and Sora was actually very well done. Can't wait for more-X

Here's Syao

Name: Syao "Vulcan" Matsuri

Age: 17

Personality: laid-back, always looking for an adventure, never depressed no matter how grim the situation, cocky and cheerful

Appearance: smooth black hair brushed to the left, blue eyes, blue jacket with white stripes on the sleeves and falcons on the shoulders, white undershirt, navy jeans, visor over eyes, and a metals pads on his wrist with tigers on them.

Nationalty: Japanese

Request-He could rescue Kari from dark digimon (dragomon, lord of dark ocean, got her from David, Syao eners dark ocean to save her, you could make dark ocean where Will's group was sent) Dragomon's a real digimon if you want to look him up

Backstory: Short version: saved west digiworld with group, wields fire element, group crowned rulers of west, saved underground digiworld, place where humans and digimon coexist, left West, bored being king.

Digimon

In-training/rookie/champion/ultimate/mega/burst mode

firemon/torchmon/flamedramon/Ifritmon/Ignusmon/ ignusmon burst mode

personality: cocky, fun-loving, hyper

appearance: Firemon looks like koromon except orange with a tail and a flame at the end. Torchmon is the same size as agumon. He has a metal mask with a flame at the top and holes for eyes which are fires. His mouth is the same as veemon's, the rest of his body is covered in armor, and he has a tail of fire. He was gauntlets on his hands that has holes that are lighters. flamedramon looks the same as as in the show. Ifritmon appears as an AeroVeedramon with red skin,black plate armor, and wings of fire,and two green horns sticking out of his head. Ignusmon loks like a bulked up version of torchmon, with gold and crimson armor, flaming wings, a crwon of fire, and a sword hilt that becomes his wrod. His shoulders aslo have flames coming out. In burst mode the flames turn blue and he growns largers, as well as getting a second sword.

Attacks: Torchmon-Lighter barrage (fires fireballs from gauntlet), Pyro Fist (punches with fire on his hand)

Ifritmon- Hell's Gate (like MagnaAngemon's attack, but black flames shoot out), Inferno's Blaze (black flame wall appears and scorches enemy)

Ignusmon- Phoenix Sword (attack with his sword), Infero's Wing (wings burst into flame and charges) Dragon's Sphere (fires a ball of plasma at enemy)

Burst mode- Eternity's Flames (stabs opponent in each shoulder with sword, burning X cuts through them from swords, then chrages through X as flaming dragon)
WolfSummoner93 chapter 6 . 8/6/2010
so far, I'm liking the story. It doesn't move too quickly, and it doesn't drag or lag. Will isn't a Gary-Stu and is funny. The plot isn't that bad too. Great chapter, can't wait for an update
Elegon chapter 6 . 8/6/2010
I love the story! I can't believe my character's already in the chapter! Keep updating!
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