Reviews for Trial and Error
Elegon chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
I hope I'm not to late for an OC!

Elegon Laze

Age: 15

Gender: Male

Physical: Black dreads, dark brown eyes, African, 5' 10", 195 lbs. (All muscle)

Clothes: Grey clothes, with some sort of pink somewhere in it.

Personality: Fun-Loving and extremely energetic. He always day dreams of a different world and will always lose track of time. He only gets violent when needs to be or if his friends or people he cares about are in trouble. He hates for people to look at him for guidance, usually never knowing what to do next. He always follows a plan through and keeps everyone on their toes with his crazy personality. He hates for people to be alone and is usually pushing his way into people's lives no matter the cost.

History: He was born as an only child and grew up getting whatever he wants, but usually never asked for anything. He got his first soccer ball when he was 6-years-old and has always loved playing the sport ever since. He seems to be a great team player and does his best to help everyone.

For digimon:

In-Training: Neumon

Personality: Playful, but will get angry if called cute by anyone or anything.

Neumon: *Neutral Shocker: Fires a weak bolt of lightning

Appearance: The creature is small and purple with a white mouth and a black stripe going down its back. The eyes of the creature are grey and big.

Rookie Level: Zenmon

Personality: Small lovable digimon and is always loyal to her friends. She has a strange voice, you hear two voices when she talks, one's evil and raspy, while the other is nice and motherly.

Zenmon: *Flash: Hand becomes engulfed in holy light and attacks her enemies with it

*Blackout: Fires two black orbs of dark energy

Appearance: Small purple bunny-like digimon with black ears, white glove-like hands, purple feet, and a symbol of a star and moon on her chest. Her eyes are black on the right, and white on the left.

Champion-Level: Equimon

Personality: Crazy digimon that loves to pull of stunts with Elegon.

Equimon: *Wild Roar: Fires a black and white laser out of her mouth

*Spirit Spin: Is engulfed in a white and black aura and spins into a dive, hitting her opponent.

Appearence: She looks like a lion. But, one half is white and angelic with the mark of Yin on it. But the other half is dark and demonic, with the mark of Yang on it.

Ultimate Level: Auradramon

Personality: This is the Mega form of Zenmon, and she has a dual personality. Whenever she's fighting, she's in full black armor and has her white eyes. Whenever she's calm, she's in full white armor with her black eyes.

Auradramon: *Crazed Dragon Blast: Shoots a black laser out of his left dragon mouth and a white laser out her right.

*Ultimate Light Shield: Creates a shield of light, using her shield.

*Full Dark Throwdown: A black aura covers her sword and she slashes her opponent.

Appearance: This digimon is at full strength and she's ready to kick-butt! She wears black and white full body armor, but it changes on her mood. Inside her mask, she has grey eyes with a scar over the left eye. She has both a pair of black wings and a pair of white wings. On one side of her is a white shield and the other is a black sword with a golden hilt. On her right hand is a white dragon mouth and the other is a black dragon mouth.

Mega-Level: Celemon

Celemon's Attacks: *Celestial Shower: Creates several energy bolts in the form of falling stars

*Meteor Bow: She fires an arrow from her bow and it has more force than a falling meteor

*Grand Impact: Begins to move at lightning speed and rams into her enemies with extreme force

*Zen Madness: Last Result Move: This attack focuses all of Celemon's energy into an arrow and she attacks her opponent with everything she has. After using this move, she turns into her In-Training form, Neumon.

Appearence: Celemon is a radiant being in silver armor and wields a black bow with white arrows, each with a mark of yin/yang on it. Her helmet has Grey eyes, and each eye has a scar over it.
RazenX chapter 5 . 8/5/2010
The plot thickens. So a massive battle is coming? Can't wait to see that. Good luck with the next one-X
WolfSummoner93 chapter 5 . 8/5/2010
it's no problem, I kind of forgot about a digimon until AFTER I sent the PM. Thanks a lot for using Momaru, you got her personality perfectly.

And the plot thickens! Another traitor on Will's team? Dang, kids these days xD Great chapter, can't wait for an update
RazenX chapter 4 . 8/3/2010
Good chapter. Will continues to become more interesting, and now we get to see him react to one of his former friends. his crest is also very unique. Can't wait for more-X

P.S. If my Oc is in it, can he be paired with Kari like it was planned in "the storm"? thanks.
WolfSummoner93 chapter 4 . 8/2/2010
And we get to meet the old friend of Will's. Great. Seems Will has some intresting thoughts , hopefuly he won't go through with them. Great chapter, can't wait for an update
WolfSummoner93 chapter 3 . 8/1/2010
o-mai. seems things are begining to make sense and come into the light. lol, great chapter and can't wait for an update
RazenX chapter 3 . 8/1/2010
Well, i didn't expect to see you here again. I reviewed on your of your previous stories: the storm. I was the one with the character with the massive backstory.

Anyway, this story is much improved. This is very unique, compared to some more predictable fics. Will is a very awesome charcater, very unique. Can't wait for more-X

P.S. if you need characters you can use my old one from the storm. just check the reviews. if you need me to resend it pm it.
WolfSummoner93 chapter 2 . 7/30/2010
awesome. its getting intense. Great chapter, can't wait for an update
WolfSummoner93 chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
nice begining, very mysterious and intresting sounding. Can't wait to see how this turns out.

Not sure what kind of OCs your looking for- or even if you still need one- but i'll send it through PM.
yukihime211 chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
I enjoyed reading your story. Your writing is very vivid. -
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