Reviews for Deliver Us
tsukuyomi.sakurachi chapter 1 . 4/12/2012
_ It was nice. Though I agree to fallingflowers. I don't think the song is needed though since it confused me a bit. And yeah, the bold sentences were very good. It was really dramatic. _ Keep up the good work!
fallingflowers chapter 1 . 8/20/2010
really good job! I like the bolded lines describing Cain. It was a very nice touch :) I'm not completely sure the song was needed though, but it was still nice :)