Reviews for Evidence
Guest chapter 1 . 5/19/2013
love it!
Anonymous033 chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
Hee :D

I know it's been ages since you wrote this story but who cares; I like it :)

I like how you described McGee's reaction to Ziva's scars; they're usually written from Tony or Ziva's own POV, and it's refreshing to read about it from another perspective.

You are very good at characterization! I could just see them and hear them.

And I do especially love the last two paragraphs :D

Soph
alexindigo chapter 1 . 9/11/2011
I found this story on another author's favourites and fell in love with it.

I LOVE how Tony saw nothing unusual and McGee only saw scars. Great writing. I'm off to read the rest of your work. Just brilliant.

Thank you so much for sharing! )
pirate-princess1 chapter 1 . 11/10/2010
This was cute. Great job.
Penpal0304 chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
Really good! Liked it )
Silvergrass chapter 1 . 8/1/2010
beautiful. i love the writing style. the subject matter, their reactions, thoughts. i like it.
Jean89 chapter 1 . 8/1/2010
Excellent! Loved it Kit! More more more please! I can never get enough of your beautiful fics
jae-vous chapter 1 . 7/30/2010
As always, great job. I look forward to more similar stories and one shots.
Alidiabin chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
Congrats on the licience.

I loved it. McGee is very in character.
xoxocaroline chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
such a cute story! love it :) xx
Jennifer Catlin DiNozzo chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
Hmmm, indeed! Love it!
WinchesterSmile chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
adorable :D
Megwolf13 chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
I like it, though I do have a question. Two really.

1) Why didn't Tony see them?

2) How could they license you as a driver? Did Ziva or Gibbs teach you to drive?
ncischick09 chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
Me likey! I love Tim's perspective on things!
brightblue chapter 1 . 7/29/2010
Man, I'm a sucker for POV fics! Good every time! (Well, not really, but yours is excellent!) This line slayed me: "...perhaps it's been a while since McGee's seen women's undergarments..." It's your choice of the word "undergarments' that makes it art.

A very believable happening and good reveal, because of course Tony wouldn't note the scars since he's so used to them. Wonderful job! :)
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